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SORRY! I never got around to reviewing your story but I thought it was great! You continue but I would love to see more piccolo/Gohan like their own lemon scene or something. Thanx if you continue!

i wish you luck with the sequel and i wonder how it turns out

WAH! I love this story!!!
J-chan

this was soo cool.. and so like the story in certain places. please continue this strory. its the awesome and well the highlight of my day, so keep the good work chuggin. drabbles are always a treat while waiting for the main event....

heeheeeheee.

just so you know your doing great, i love a good gk/vg especially like this one.

thank you for updating so soon!! yay!

I love this story! I'm reading this one on both AdultFan and Fanfiction. I hope you continue, and I would love to see any and all sequels.

Hey,
This is alot different to the stuff you usually get on here and im loving it!
great chapter, loved the lemon ^_^
update soon!

Soneji xxx

Ohh you can't leave it here!

I loved the shower scene, very erotic. And it seems Goku regrets not coming back now. So he should.

Please write a sequel.

my friend gave me the link to this story and i'm so happy she did its great and im hope to read more soon, i love how Vegeta is. he is one of my fav along side Goku and the pairing with Piccolo and Gohan is the iceing on the cake as they say. i hope ChiChi get more bashing cos the only one i hate in all of DBZ is her and that F***ing frying pan, i hate her hiting Goku its just not right and i love Vegeta putting her in her place. anyway is Goku going to have a tail like Vegeta cos that be so cool if he did and dose the boy still hav there tail? it be cool to see Gohan using his tail on Piccolo lol. please update soon and not keep ur readers waiting like i do lol ^^;

From Kitty

This story is great! I'm looking forward to read the next chapter :)

Hi^^ I love your story! happly waiting for the next chapter,
J-chan