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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cried when I read the second ending... Y_Y
It's just not fair for pour Ed.
Though it was very well written. All I it was actually!
I'm going to keep this fic close to my heart always.
*That last sentence was kind of cheezy ^^*
It's just not fair for pour Ed.
Though it was very well written. All I it was actually!
I'm going to keep this fic close to my heart always.
*That last sentence was kind of cheezy ^^*
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked both of your endings. Both in two different directions and both well written. I liked the happy ending but I also liked the more (?)realistic ending. I would have never been able to pick. I liked how you gave us two different endings and let us decide how we wanted it to end. Kudos to you.
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good endings...of course I like the one where Maes is alive! But they were both good! I'm sad its over! Awesome story! I'm glad you kept with it!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*irritated squeals* nooo... why? i hate maes being dead! it's not fair!! after i read the first ending i was thinking 'why couldn't the happy ending be second', but now i'm glad the sad ending is last, because it just feels... truer, i suppose. it doesn't seem right to change so much, but it was so much happier!! honestly, it's like the happy ending was the dream that ed in the sad ending was having. *sigh* great job. it's so sad, but it's really good all the same... *tears*~
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
clapping is heard from Af's mom's house and Rysh's place (gotta love speaker phones) wonderful *sniffing* definately a six hankey (three each) ending on the second one... forgive me but we like the first one better
affie and rysha
affie and rysha
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved it! Good update!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this, your turn of phrase rings so true it's like we're right on the bed with them. Which is of course where anyone reading this story wants to be!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...ummm just wow that was wonderful and we can't thank you enough for writing it please continue when you can
Rysha and Affie
Rysha and Affie
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot fear the wrath of Hughs for he can destroy your life with but a little research. thanks for the update can't wait for more.
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRGGGHH!! i hate winry. i think i might have forgot to review a chapter or two, but oh well... anyway, i hate her and want her dead. well, not dead. but...you know what i mean!! and yay maes!! he's the best boyfriend ever! *girly sigh* i wish he was MY boyfriend... anyway, i'm upset that this is almost finished! NOOO!! it can't end so soon! either way, i believe the happy ending. great job, and please update soon!!~