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oh come on!! what was that? that was tiny!!! *sobs* i can't wait for more!!~

aww. poor edo-kun. he's so confused. though i totally agree with being confused; who the hell wouldn't be? i'm so happy to see rapid updates! i was aware you try to update quickly, since i've read some of your other work, but i think i've been spoiled by the fact that they've all been finished, and this is still going. grr. that means i have to WAIT. phooey. oh well, i look forward to more!~

There's a part of me that's wondering what the hell I'm doing reading this considering what a huge RoyEd fan I am. MaesEd? O_o? You don't see that one very often, if at all. I was surprised that Ed kissed Maes back at the end of chapter one. I mean, Ed's still coming to grips with his homosexuality and had just learned more about Maes and the military than he ever suspected. I would have thought him to be too overwhelmed and/or too shy or confused to act so aggressively so early on in whatever this is that's going on between them. But, this is Ed we're talking about here - act first, deal with the consequences later. I should know better! ;) I did have to laugh when Ed asked Maes if Elysia was his! :D good question! I hadn't thought of that 'til he mentioned it! :) I also laughed when Maes called Roy a man-slut! LOL! It's true! XD Maes has been like a father figure for Ed for a while now so that will definitely throw a monkey wrench in things if Ed can't get past it. squicky. I can't see Roy blackmailing Ed over this. Tease him about it when no one else is around, maybe; blackmail, no. Oh, the line, "He looked seriously confused not to mention resembled something of a bird who’d eaten the canary with the grin he was sporting", should be a 'cat' who'd eaten the canary not a 'bird' who'd eaten the canary. Ya might wanna fix that.
Koneko =^.^=

It's nice to go back and reread the chapters of these as they start to come out on AFF.net. I can take my time and enjoy them, unlike when they came out on LJ, i would spead read them and miss things. and W00t! You;ve actually got three different reviewers for this thing that aren't me! Yay! XDDDD

This one is an especially good follow up to the faulty first part that you did as a oneshot originally. It really took the small inconsistancies and owned them. Thank you for writing this story for me. It really meant a lot to me that you were willing to attempt my pairing, and you know what? It STILL means a lot to me. :D

its funny how two little numbers being the same can ruin a perfectly good fan fic tsk tsk

Just lovely
This one is so cute , I am more inclined to be into Roy and Ed but you lay this out so well that I enjoy it.
Mase isn't cheating and its great.

WooHoo! The Un-fic arrives on aff.net! Now you must finish it!!! Bwahahahaha! I love my Un-ficcy :D

Aww..poor Ed always confused! Thanks for updating so fast! Please update again!

I love it I love it I love it! I definately do NOT see enough EdXHughes fics on here! I think its awesome post soon please!!!!

oooh. i'm intrigued. i've read 'for her. for him.' and i've got about 50 chapters of 'worlds colide' left. i'm really interested in this and hope to see more soon. i'm actually kind of anti-huges-being-gay, just because i hate to see him not with gracia. some background with roy in their childhood is fine, but i hate seeing him with men during the series. BUT!! you have set up an acceptable environment. gracia knows and is okay with it. that makes me happy. i look forward to more!~