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I am thoroughly enjoying this story and really hope you intend to write more. Thank you for taking the time to write it in order for us to be able to read it.

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Oh wow that was sad but great . Hope there is more soon.

hello! it's been a while.... this fic is not forgotten i hope! it's such an intriguing interesting fic ...
pls update soon!

damn that Relena! she is such an annoying bitch trying to get between them like heero would ever leave duo for her!

ha ha i loved how they got ride of that doug guy! yess you are sooo good with the twist and turns but it ended good! X3

thank yooooouuuu for the fix!!! i cant wait for more!! ^____^

Ah der. Of course he wore that. Now I feel blond. Well that was a great way to not go into detail. It really was more real that way. And I don't think you could write a boring chapter. I love your stuff.

Ah, damn Relena, the drunk whore. Would have served her right if Heero had slapped her, but I can totally understand Duo stepping in for her and I love him for it. It breaks my heart to see Heero like that, beating himself up. I love this Sally. She's... strong, still feminine, and level-headed... and apparently not a threat to Heero. ^_^ Heh, and funny that Duo's the one to sum it all up so simply. Oh man, I love the scene with "Dougie." I laughed so hard at the fuck my ass, sitting on his ass, kicking your ass thing. That was pure brilliance. The shark thing was a little odd for foreplay, but a good analogy none the less and I do love the biting. And as always your sex was very hot. I like the hurried, I need you know, flavor to it. And Heero crying again breaks my heart... again. I'm proud of him, though, that he was able to tell those for lies without Duo trying to convince him. That's a really big step for him. *cough* kill her *cough* Okay, maybe that's over reacting, but still. Stupid should hurt.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

you know what else I just realized.. Quatre was a fan of Duo yet he never noticed that Duo was actually his fav. pop star?
Gah!!
I guess blonds really are dumb... and I'm one to talk, i'm a natural blond trying to be a brunette.
But jeez... oh did I also mention that I liked the parts in chapter 19 when you have all the different conversations going on and they're all choppy.. just like if you were walking through a crowd and just catching bits of the conversation, I really liked that. It just made it seem more realistic and as if you were actually there listening in. <3
Wow... I think I'm trying to make up for my lack of comments by adding a bunch, haha sorry.
My mind is just kind of everywhere and I've been just kind of typing off of what comes to my mind. >_<

O__O such a twist. I was not expecting Duo to be a pop singer, and again, you have awed me with another plot twist.
Gah!! I love it so much. (and by the way, Savage Garden is awesome. I actually recently made my gf give me her savage garden cds so I could put them on my ipod to listen to.. though i still say the 1st cd is better then the 2nd one.) But I like the song, Truly, Madly, Deeply. I'm glad you used that song <3
Anyways, life is settling down again, for now, which I am thankful for and I plan on leaving reviews again regularly again.
But anyways, I am off to bed
Another review will probably be posted when I am more awake.
Just letting you know I read your latest chapter and leaving a review while everything is fresh in my mind :)
Until next time,
Guten Abend!
Fujinakaheero <3

Ah, I'm sorry I went AWOL for a while there. I got distacted by something shiny. Chapter 19 first. I'll do what I did last time and post two reviews. I don't know if I forgot or if you just didn't mention, but what did Duo end up wearing to the party? An actual dress? Maybe I just forgot you said something about it in another chapter. Also, I was a little surprised by the number of typos. I don't remember you having that many before. They weren't a big deal, but they're there. I'm really glad to see Heero being more confident with Duo's love. It was also different to see Duo panicking about his job protecting Heero. Oh, and bring on the kinky sex! I can't wait for that. i love how you chopped up the party gossip. Just enough to get the idea, but more realistic than having full sentences.

*runs out of the room crying with a nose bleed* *comes back like nothing happened* Well, I think that was my favorite chapter so far. I love Savage Garden to start with and I love that song. You painted Duo singing to Heero so well. I can't believe that's what Duo's been doding since he left Heero. Or that Quatre was a fanboy for him and didn't notice. And that flirting at the end, delicious. I don't have a single negative thing to say... wow... that almost never happens about anything. Ah, I think I'm going to read it again. It was that good. I love you.