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sooo *looks around*
I've seen this story up for a while and i ended up reading the 1st chapter a while back too.
Didn't have a clue as to what was going on and thought this would not be a good story, so i left it.
The other night my girlfriend and i started talking about stories we have read on here lately before falling asleep.
She started telling me about this story, giving me the general plot line to this and what not.
I'm all like, oh yeah? So it actually explains what happened in the first chapter?
Ok, so i came back today and decided to start reading the 2nd chapter... then i went onto the 3rd and so on and so forth.
And now I am completely hooked.. you've got me going "wtf?" during a lot of it but then here i am still reading it just to find out what happens next.
I have to say, you are writing a good story, one of those "omg, i don't get this at all but I feel the need to just keep reading." kind of stories. I actually really, really like this story, the plot, the way the characters are, it's unique enough to keep the reader hooked.
So anyways, just letting you know,you have a new and loyal reader who will probably review on every update you do :D
So until next time,
ja ne!
Fujinakaheero

Good, then I'll keep reviewing even if it's because of my own selfish desire to get you to update sooner. :P As long as you keep writing, I'll keep telling you that I like it. Well unless you write something that sucks, but I doubt that's going to happen. I might be a little slow, but now I think I can really understand how things work between Heero and Duo.

Re-Acting as If: Well I think you did a wonderful job. I really felt like they would have done anything and everything for Duo. Though I still think you're mean for not telling us where Heero was doing whatever it was he was doing. I'm not very good at waiting, but I can tell you I'll read it if you write another story dedicated to Heero explaining that to Duo and whatever else.

Are you tired of hearing from me yet? Just kidding. It wouldn't matter if you were, I'd still review. You're making me think you're the master of bittersweet. Heero beats Duo, but at the same time you're left with a sweet awwwww aftertaste. *snicker* Quatre screaming at Trowa was scary and funny. Angry little thing isn't he? And now it's poor Trowa. I can understand not wanting to play those stupid games, though, and the consequences that usually follow. Alright, I bothered you enough. *huggles* Thanks for writing this.

I love the twists and turns you are putting into this story. Its fun to watch the characters change

What the hell? You can't stop there! *angry noises* Arg! *pants* Sorry, but you know how much I like this story. Sorry I didn't review after 8, but finals got to me. So, let's see... I like how you gave us more insight into what happened between them when they were younger. It was very, very bittersweet, but the understanding makese the story better. I was a little surprised with how Wufei presented his previous... engagements with Heero. Also, WHAT THE HELL IS QUATRE DOING!?!?!?! *panting* Now that that's out, get to writing. This is a very exciting part.

controlling is good, but Heero takes it too far sometimes

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Hahaha! No one orders Heero around. Silly girl. Got to admire her for having the balls to try that though. Stupid, but still ballsy. Sally sounds awesome in this. Though you did have me thinking they were going to give Duo a physical or something. :p I'm not sure if I'm disappointed or not. As to kittens having claws, I think I've got a couple scars from kitten claws and teeth. I think Duo being described as a kitten is perfect. Cute and cuddly until you piss him off because then he'll make you bleed.

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Sweet! There's more! So happy! *hands out 1x2 cookies* I love Duo pestering Heero for attention and food. You're really trying to make him seem cat-like aren't you? That's such a wonderful way to meet the man you're going to be working with. Right over the couch and BAM! Lovely move.