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Buen Primer Capitulo.

Le hace falta una segunda parte es una muy buena historia.

Hello! I would like to contact you because I am interested in translating one of your stories into Spanish (In Your Dreams)

I await an answer soon, since I am really interested in making that translation as soon as possible.

I will leave my referral email to get in touch more.

akizayatsumiko@gmail.com.

What an amazing story! I should have read it much earlier! Though I'm not a native English speaker I have been enjoying every moment reading it, and would very much like to share it with my friends. Though it's highly unlikely you will see my review but... if you do, could I have your permission to translate it into Chinese? I will definitely credit you and link back here. Thankyou for such an incredible story！

I totally did not expect this ending and I LOVED IT. I honestly thought Vegeta would wake up to Goku sleeping next to him but the twist was extremely well crafted! thank you for writing such an emotional and beautiful fic. I loved every minute of it and would recommend this to anyone. you are a fantastic author! 

 

Thank you for this beautiful work or art! 😭❤❤❤❤

I cannot find your deviantart account what is your name there?

Please write more dbz fics!

try doing a sequel fic!

0_0 im literally crying!!! i did NOT expect this kind of ending! but by god, was it satisfying! this is probably-- no, DEFINNITELY the best DBZ yaoi i have ever read. Maybe even the best of all. I cannot describe how much i have enjoyed this fic, really. thank you. you are amazing. i am not worthy *kneels*

this story was incredible I cried, laughed, got, angry, I have never read a story that triggered all my emotions just by reading it ,it was truly amazing it would have been awesome if we could have had a part were vegeta entered the lab at the end and blew villa's head off that would've rocked but it was amazing anyways my question for you is are you going to make a sequel to this epic story

HO-LY CRAP I loved this fan fic. I could not stop reading it. I'm not even sure how to say how much I loved it. It was well written, emotional, and just wonderful. I LOVED the unique personifications of the characters, ESPECIALLY Goku. The development arc for him was just AMAZING. I also loved how the characters interacted. It felt so natural, like real conversations.
I really have no criticism against this story. That Villa guy was a BASTARD, but a wonderfully written bad guy to make me hate him so very much. And that ending.... THAT ENDING!!! AUGH THAT ENDING!!! That... I just don't... didn't see that coming. At ALL.
Ok, no more gushing. but I might just do some fan art. There are so many wonderful moments I want to draw... which one to pick....

I first read this waaaaay back in 2007... I was... *thinks about it*.... about 17-18 o.o
Now, it 2012- almost 2013. I'm now 23 years of age. And I can say that I love this story even more than I did the first time I read through this!
I have a feeling you'll probably won't see this but I just have to say what an amazing writer you was back then and hopefully still are!

Cg*