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I have just spent every spare moment I've had for the past week reading this! I love it! I wish u would let Goku be able to train and get as strong as he used to be-Vegeta deserves to have his ass kicked by Goku-esp as he was being such a jerk to him about feeding the baby! I don't think Goku would ever really be this submissive and I don't like that-but I can see where u're going with it-esp the post tramatic stuff-! I love it and will def keep coming back to read updates!! Great job! :)

Hee! This story has been very cute, and I'm thrilled to have found some GOOD DBZ fanfiction after all this time. Only on chapter 29 so far, but very much enjoying it. Thanks!

By the by, any chance we might see a bit of Trunks/Goten in the background? I'd love to see a few more tails waving about, not to mention, I've always liked the idea that Goten inherited some of his father's more *cough*special*cough* traits. That, and I adore that pairing as well. ^^ Of course, you're the writer! But it would be nice to see! v

Too lazy to loggedin :3

I totally forgot to review this chapter, seriously I thought I haddone it the irst time I read it but I just noticed how wrong I was, sorry o_o;;

Since I hadsawone ofyour drawings relatedto this chapter, "neglected" if my memory doesn't fail, I was feeling such pity for poor Goku as I getto the partwhen he was so content with his plan to seduce Vegeta D: I havea theory, Vegeta's vision must be getingimpaired with his old age, that's the only possible explanation for him to not jump a sweaty yummy Goku j/k It's certainly interestingto seehow Vegeta's personality switched or to be more accurate how his protective instincts got exacerbated sincehis recent paternity, and how he feels more close to this new daughterthan he ever seemed to do with Trunks. As I mentioned it in my last fic, I always have believed too that all the losses in his past would turn him over-protective, but it's also frustrating to see his incapicity to fully understand his mate's feelings. Damn, when itfinally seems that things are starting to go beter for the couple, Vegeta always ends screwing all somehow. He needs some therapy too, but ofcourse he wouldn't even admit it, though I wonderifhe would get to caludicate for Goku's sake if things get too far.

It's worrying me Goku's incapacity to form a srong bond with his daughter, even to the point to neglect his duties just to look for his mate's attention and even more now that he also is developing a sentiment of jealousy against his own baby. I hope they can findsoon away to sort things out. I think Vegeta should try to share more time with both, herchild and Goku, the three ofthem together and that he would somehow help Goku to develop stronger feelings for theirchild, but with how strong-headed he is, that seems dificult. Damn, Vegeta you should be more caring and understanding. I hope the child won't develop also negative feelings against her mamma with all that's going on. Saiyan babies seem to be more intelligent and perceptive, (as proved by how they can learn and remember their missions after being instructed in their spacepods during their travels through spaceforpurging missions) I wonderifthe baby is able to notice atleastto some degree her mom's and dad's attitudes. It would be so sad ifall his would tear her apart from his mom T.T

P.S: Just disregard all the typos and weird things in my previous review, my keyboard is being a bitch today.
Now locked Vegeta and Goku together so they can recoversome common sense whether it to be by beating the crap out of each other or by Vegeta screwing Goku's brains off, or both but they must do something, soon.

Oof; poor Goku. @_@ He and Vegeta really need to sit down and have a talk about these things.
So sad that he did all that and not a single bit of notice.

Hope you feel better soon!

Both Vegeta and Goku seem to have knuckleheadeditis. Sure, they have issues, but I think what they really need is to have a good heart to heart chat and get out into the open what both are feeling at the moment in regards to their relationship and their daughter. It's not healthy for Goku to feel like the only thing Vegeta is interested in was his ability to bear a child and it isn't good for Vegeta to direct his fear at Goku by being an ass. If I had a man who treated me like that after I gave birth, I'd slap him. Well, maybe not, but I'd let him know I don't like being treated as nothing more than a food machine. Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter, hope your carpal tunnel gets better, and look forward to the next update.

UhOh....looks like poor Goku is having post partum on top of his depression not a good thing. I hope Vegeta gets his ass into gear and turns the ship around before Goku leaves him. another awesome chapter I can't wait for the next chapter! i do hope that your carpal tunnel calms down and you feel better :)

**gets a stick and looks menacing....well tries anyway**You sit a heal we can wait
J-chan

I'm so excited! Over Thanksgiving I didn't have the internet at my house so I didn't get to read chapter 54 until last night, but it was cool because I got another chapter today!

Yay I'm happy that Goku is getting some time with the baby. :P Hopefully Vegeta will stop being a butt. Love the story please update soon!

VICTOR IS A GOVERNMENT SPY! Compleitly groundless I know but im going to be shure of it till hes proven inocent. Vegeta's bad mood probably comes from having to change diapers, I know mine did when I had to change my lil sis's nappys. PEE-EWW! XD. I hope Goku starts doing that stuff soon, cos at the moment Gokus getting all the nice baby chores and Veg is getting all the not-so-nice baby chores.

I hope whatever it is thats affecting your typing clears up soon, it sounds painful.