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PS : Great chapter, as always your story telling is exellent :)

Ok, so things aren't back to normal yet =(
I was wondering when Victor would make another appearance =D

Poor Vegeta =(
I know I should probably be on Goku's side....
But the fangirl in me won't let that be ^.^
And what Victor said made perfect sense to me. It's natural to fear losing those you love, especially if it's happened before.

Hope your carpal tunnel gets better...
Don't force yourself to write just to satisfy us! lol!
It's not like we'll hunt you down with pitchforks or anything....^_^
xxx

The name the name~! X3
Waii~ I bet Goku's puppy-expression's so cute!
Also Vegeta looks way too deep into things. XD

Congrats on the fic anniversary and for all you have achieved with this story.
It was a relief to see them sort things out and that Goku was finally allowed to bond with the baby. I don’t know what could have happened had Vegeta persisted in not trusting his mate around their daughter. It was so touching to see that they can easily work things out with a little talk, that they can communicate without Vegeta going ballistic or suspicious about his mate’s reproaches; it shows all the love they share even if they are though guys and such XD
It was so touching to see them finally acting like a real family and Goku saying he was happy. Vegeta is learning to be a caring and understanding mate, it seems, about time! XDDD That will certainly be a great step ahead for Goku’s recovering of his psychological problems. It would be great to see some family moments and how the parents handle their new task, owing your delirious sense of humor that could be epic. But this si your story so whatever you decide to do with it it will be great, of that I’m positive (It would be hilarious to see Vegeta changing’s the baby’s diaper…with all that hair lol Oh well don’t mind me here, I was just going overboard, but at least that could be a funny idea for a pic, don’t you thinks so? *nudges* That reminds me…I’m still waiting that pic of yours of the lactation…^^;; )

D: My choice for the baby’s name didn’t win. Damn! I guess I can’t have everything ;D

Keep on with the story as superbly as you did till now, there aren’t many stories worthy to read on this fandom anymore. (And if sometime you ever decide to resume “Try again” I will die a happy girl :P )

I think...this story is too long. I'm sorry I had to say that but it's my honest opinion. It really should have ended at least twenty chapters ago because this feels like about five stories jammed into one. There is too much filler, there is too much stuff that isn't important to the story, there is too much unneeded story fluff. I liked the beginning of the story, it was pretty good and rather creative but it's like you lost your creativity after the whole Villa plot, because now this is the same generic story I've read before by many different authors. I really wanted to finish it to give a fair opinion, but I really couldn't get to the end. I got bored, I got annoyed, I got tired and I felt strained just trying to read this. When that happens, it's not a very good thing. I really see almost no connection between what's happening now and what happened at the beginning of the story. One thing a good author should know is when to end a story.

Cute. I like the name Momoko. Very nice, thank you so much for updating, I love the rate that this story is progressing at. Excellent job!

Just one word. Awwwwww!!! does that count as a word? I am glad that goku is getting a little better, meantly and physicaly. and i didnt know yesterday was the 1 year anniversity! Congradulations! and chapter 55 is as great and maybe even better than chapter 1. I have found that with some authors the longer the story the worse it gets, but this is great.

XD happiness=plotting.....hehe, I think my bf would agree with 'Geta. YAY! Geta got some sense in him!
J-chan

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR FANFIC!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! =D

How about I make the wish for you? ^_^
((I wish that the fic is still going strong this time next year =D))

Oh I'm so happy that this seems to be going better for them now after last week's devestating chapter =)
you have improved todays mood! ^_^ whoopwhoop!

I liked quite a few of the names, so was stuck on what to choose =(
I didn't really like Momo on it's own...but preferred the idea of that being a nickname, so it stole my vote =)
Well done Chi!

I loved art of Momoku that's been done on DA so far too ^_^
She's a little cutie =)
Waiting for next week, as always. xxx

Very cute chapter! I'm so glad that Goku finally got to spend alone time with the baby :) And the name is so precious and a very Goku like name to choose. Congrats on the one year anniversary! Great job I can't see what happens next!