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Wow...I just finished reading this story and I am so impressed... Very well written! And I can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope that Goku will begin to enjoy his daughter :) But again a great story and i can't wait to see what is in store for the new family! Keep writing!

O.o' wow are his friends that dense? Where Chichi's husband in all this? -.- I hope he gives all the dumb asses a good lecture for being so insensitive to Goku!
J-chan

Poor Goku, having nightmares of being rejected and then waking up and feeling left out of the loop. I can see why he has such a difficult time adjusting to the arrival of his daughter (which I am excited about!), but it was a really good sign when he went in to see her on his own and felt some sort of connection. Too bad Vegeta ruined the moment. I hope things iron themselves out soon.

THAT'S HORRIBLE POOR GOKU!!! TOT

I'm gonna kill Vegeta!!!

OMG that makes me sad!! I can't believe Vegeta is so mistrustful! Poor Goku!! Love the story update soon!!!!

When I read that first scene, I swear -I- felt like I was having a nightmare. My entire body became so rigid and I was SO scared for Goku. D: I can't even describe the feeling of relief I felt when it turned out to be a dream! XD

This chapter...is so freaking sad! I feel so bad for Goku! He's in pain--in more ways than one! :< POOR 'KUUU!! ...Although, he's in bandages and thatsreallysexysoI'mprobablygoingtodoodlethat.....X3

The lactating scene was hilarious. I could hardly handle Goku's reaction. XD You've described him so adorably in this chapter! The way you wrote him sneaking into the baby's room with his hands tucked to his chest...AWAH! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? -:: Throws herself to the floor before you and shakes you by your ankles. ::- I CAN'T WAIT ANOTHER WEEK! Do you know how long last week was? O.O It felt like 2 weeks! TWO I TELL YOU!

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I'm happy it's a girl. Momo sounds even better now. ....:3

I want to draw the baby--I think you described her well enough that I could but..I would rather you drew her first so I know -exactly- how you intend her to be.

Vegeta you dickhead!!!!! ='(
Oh I'm far too emotionally involved with this story....
I can't believe how Vegeta's acting...
Vegeta, you're meant to LOVE him!! You're supposed to know him inside out!? Why accuse him!?!?!?! He kept your baby you idiot- let him attempt to bond with her!!!!!!

Oh I could rant forever about this >=(
Vegeta's not in my good books right now.

Your deviantart spoiler fuelled my anger for him too...

But he'll eventually see he's being such a git...............right???

Seee??? You're such a fantastic writer to have inspired this furious emotion in me. Lol. My emotions literally change as I read on, IT'S MORE THAN JUST A STORY DAMMIT!
I think the little girl sounds fantastically cute, too. =)
Will we see your interpretation of her on deviantart sometime soon?
I certainly hope so ^^

As is becoming my new phrase....
Roll on Monday =)

Ouch. I say ouch because I could feel all the pain and confusion bombarding Goku. He's at war with himself. A masterfully crafted chapter with tension layering upon layer by the paragraph. Thank you.

I did read all the 53 chapters yestardy. Sorry I would have liked to leave reviews for all the chapters I was missing but I wanted to catch up with the story ^^; Now, after reading the last chapter there are a lot of things I would like to have commented, things that I may comment into detail on future reviews. But I wanted to remark the impressive job you are making delving into Goku's personality, complex and emotions. Specially since he got pregnant. And this last chapter was beautiful. Damn Vegeta, what a jerk, his lack of empathy about his mate is ...well just makes me want to slaps him Grrr. Goku needs to recover his emotional stability, but Vegeta is making things worse. How much could Goku take before getting to his break point, if things keeps on like this, Vegeta is going to regret it later, I hope things don't get to the point it cannot be fixed D:
Genious!

Waaah~! Poor Goku! TT_TT
Vegeta's being so bossy and vaguely paranoid. How's Goku supposed to bond with the baby if his friends won't give him alone time with her?