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I promised you a review for this chapter because the huge review that i'm in the process of working on is still being worked on.

Review on chapter 53:

A seahorse. That's what came to mind when i thought about how the baby was coming and i started giggling so hard I almost fell out of my chair. Goku the seahorse! *is bricked*

This chapter intense, but surprisingly amusing. I'm surprised Goku hasn't throttled Vegeta by now, I sure as fuck would have. That fucker would have been dead *grumbles*

But yes. The birthing process was done really really well, and it was different. I like different and original things and this is totally is one of them.

The little conversation between Goku and Vegta made my heart retch because i'm like "Would vegeta pick the baby over Goku? hooooooooooooooly shit, probably!" So i was majorly freaked by that. I'm really surprised that Goku's motherly instincts haven't kicked in yet. I would have been like "Boom! Dr. Fuckface! Even though you completely fucked me up, I still have happiness. And he purrs! HA!"

Purring saiyans, ftwfersure.

I'm really really worried about the baby right now, even though it's crying that means it's breathing and perfectly okay.

At the same time, this whole thing brings up more fucking problems.

This is lovely.

I'm pumped, and I so can't wait for next monday.

Let's see if Vegeta still wants his clothes back.

*cackles*

Please excuse this fangirl flailing review, but you're amazing.

<3 Kyo

**Chews on lip** He's ok right?
J-chan

Thank you so much for updating once more. You have done an absolutely excellent job with this chapter. Please update again when you have the time.

Well, it finally happened! I knew Goku would be able to do it without the doctor. He is a Saiyan, after all, and it would be silly for him to have been in this condition without being able to have the baby in a safe and natural way. As for Vegeta leaving Goku, I hope he doesn't do that. I don't think he will, but Goku leaves him in a hard place if he doesn't accept the child that Vegeta obviously wants. I can't wait to find out what the baby is like and if it is a boy or a girl. I actually hope it is a girl. Anyway, looking forward to the next update.

That was INTENSE! O_O
I was holding my breath half the time in anticipation. Did Goku have the baby? Or did he simply pass out? So many questions.. X3
Looking forward to the next chapter! :3

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

I KNEW you were gonna do that!!!! ='(

Oh my God, I'm acting like this is as important as a real birth....
You'd better be a fan of happy endings >=(
I'll come for you, you know.

P.S. Vegeta almost broke my heart in that silence =( =( =(
P.P.S. MONDAY WILL NOT COME QUICK ENOUGH

OMG!! I can't wait to see what you do next!! Love the story, your a wonderful author!! :D

This is definitely one of those chapters that make me wish I didn't have to wait a week until the next update. D:

Poor Goku!!! But at least it's out now! D: All over! ..Right? He's gonna wake up, right?? D: D: D: D: -:: Over-worries. ::-

I really liked the first scene, where Vegeta first discovered that Goku was missing. Gotta love those instincts of his--I don't even want to think of what Goku would have done if Vegeta hadn't woken up. =x

And when Vegeta first finds him--the way you described how Goku was all quiet and to himself besides the occasional whimper...I DON'T KNOW WHY THATS CUTE BUT IT IS. ..But its also sad....D: D: D: D: AAHH I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL.

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They have no senzu beans.

... Goku's going to wake up to see that doctor standing over him, isn't he. YOU'RE GOING TO MAKE GOKU SO UPSET, AREN'T YOU.

I want more! What are they going to do with the baby! Why didn't Vegeta answer Goku's question! WHY IS PICCOLO THERE!?

-:: Falls over. Crawls over to a pile of paper and picks up her pencil in order to doodle but then freezes and looks over at the word document with her story on it. Looks from pencil to story...pencil...story....pencil...story.::-

I was so nervous that Goku was going to go into labor right there in the bathtub. @_@
Very relieved that everything seems fine.

I have a feeling that when he does go into labor, things are going to be rough on everyone.

Excellent chapter!

Wow I love you story! I saw some art for it on deviant art and I thought I'd give it a look. I LOVE IT!! Please update as soon as you can!! Your a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what you have planned next for Goku and Vegeta!