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I totally love this story, its so interesting ^_^ I can't wait to read more of it, I finally got through it all and it leaves off here T_T

Do you have an updates list? If you do coud you please add me? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com

Good luck with the next chapter ^_^ Should be interesting to write :D

I discovered this story on what I supposed must have been...Tuesday night? Wednesday night? I dunno.
I saw it on deviantart to begin with, and so was under the impression it was only 22 chapters long...
When you gave me this link, I jumped for joy that it was 30 chapters longer! =D
And it's literally been a struggle to tear myself away from the computer each time it was necessary...
Each night since I discovered it I haven't been able to force myself to go to bed any earlier than 2am.
Safe to say, I ADORE this story.
And I really do mean ADORE.
You should be extremely happy that you can write such fantastic stuff...I sure would be!
I'm completely hooked.
Lord knows Monday is miraculously going to morph into my favourite day of the week.
Please don't tell me that someday this story will end...
You'd break my heart =)

IM BACK! Im sorry i've been gone so long and i've missed so many chapters! But im caught up to speed and stoked for the next chapter!

I just realized i apparently never reviewed this fic. So im sure you're wondering wth who is this?! I really enjoy your writing and the original i idea you have going here!

Trust me, I'm still very much glued to this story. Umm.. Could you pass the glue solvent, please?

Nice chapter. Is seems as thought the birth will be occuring very shortly. I can't wait to find out what little Vegeta/Goku will look like and how Goku will react once he sees the child that he created with Vegeta.

Why do I keep forgetting about this story? Must be my lack of sleep, screwing me all over the place it is!

I got through the chapter despite the fact my eyes were starting to blur XD I love it still. Gosh, this story just keeps getting better with each new chapter. You really know how to keep us wanting more. I'm really curious as to how Goku's birth is going to turn out. I hope all goes well but then again I don't see you ending this story with

"And he had a wonderful, clean, painless birth. The end".

*rubs chin*

Well, can't wait for more!

Love always,

Talitha.

uhhh, Vegeta could have a dream sense they are mates on how to help Goku through this and find that he has to us a controlled ki blast to cut to the forming canal to much and the baby comes out easy but Goku suffers massive blood lose and possible death but too little and the baby has to force to much and get hurt and again Goku also suffers. Goku could have a numbing while this happens so he's not hurt and this leave the bulk of what needs to be done and his mates health in Vegeta's hands.

Oh that was hilarious and wonderful in so many ways! X3
I never saw Goku's "nest" coming. XD
Poor Vegeta getting bit like that.

Good to know the boys are supportive about Goku's pregnancy. :3

I loved the chapter. I was thinking that he was making a nest, but I wasn't sure. I'm glad you confirmed it. I was becoming really curious. As for how Goku should give birth, I think that he should sneak into his nest and let his instincts guide him instead of having Bulma turn the birthing process into a medical and scientific exploit. I think he should use his nest and see what comes from that. Of course, I'm sure it won't be that simple, especially since Goku still isn't happy about being pregnant. Looking forward to the next update.