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YAAAAAAAAAY!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!! That has really made my day XD

I loved it!! I had a feeling Goku was up to something like that, still the thought of Goku lying in a nest of Vegeta's clothes is just adorable!! ¬_¬ hmmm DeviantArt ideas... Vegeta was hilarious at the end, it was his own fault for not backing off haha

I burst out laughing at Goten's reaction to Goku's large tummy thinking it was a tumor and he was dying XD!! How do you come up with these things? Pure genious!! I look forward to another amazing chapter ^.^

Nice. Actually, it's pretty common for people to create nesting grounds of clothing when in need o f comfort. I love how you described it perfectly, excellent job. I haven't been able to read a lot lately so it was a real treat to read this update. Keep up the good work!

D'aww, I loved the scene with Gohan, Goku and Goten. It was really sweet. I'm glad Gohan took the news well, we definitely don't need a repeat of what happened before. At least, Goku doesn't. He's got enough going on with him as it is.

I was actually partially joking when I made the guess about the nests but lmao I think it's cool.

Vegeta is a hilarious, sarcastic bastard XD

Great chapter! Since I don't hang around on this site anymore right now, I keep forgetting to check for updates. But don't think that I got bored with the story because I so didn't! ^^ I love it as always.

Love always,

Tabz.

Sorry i'm hiding my email... but give it via his tail? Would be kinda sexy...

-holds up chainsaw evilly- ...cut the belly...-laughs evilly-

Well, I have an idea on how the birth goes but...^^; I can't share it with you because I'm going to be writing my own fanfiction soon and want it to be an original story. I trust you'll come up with something great though--after you came up with that cool tail lube detail, I have much faith in your creative muse. xP

-:: Glances to the previous comment. ::- Just...do me a favor and don't cut his stomach open. >_O Not only has that idea been over used but it doesn't make much sense anymore. If he's able to get pregnant in the first place, his body should have a natural way of getting the baby out.

You have a talent of ending your chapters with the most hilarious lines. XD Vegeta's rabies quote was incredible.

I love Goku's reaction to his pregnancy. It's so human. I've never been in that situation but I can imagine feeling like that. Terrifying. And even worse when it goes against everything he has been brought up to believe irrefutable. It makes me think of the Alien films, not that Goku needs that image.


Thank you for the chapter.

Another lovely chapter from your talented hand. I'm glad that you have Goku being weirded out and uncomfortable about his pregnancy. Considering his past with Dr. Villa, the fact that he IS a man, and his newfound insecurities, I would think it strange he was A-okay about having a child. Not that I want Goku to suffer or having strange feelings about his child, but as you have written him, I think this fits. I do, however, hope that he recovers enough from his past experiences and insecurities to realize that what he has with Vegeta was created out of love, and that things have a way of working out. Looking forward to the next update and I hope you have good travels while you are out of your state.

Thanks for updating and sharing. I like how you characterized Goku more like a new mom in the first 3 months of pregnancy. It's no joy ride all the way, in fact some women that I know got absolutely sick b/c of the stress on her body. Take my friend Jane, she was 18 when she had her first baby and it was unplanned. Apparently she had become so stressed that she regularly squeezed the babe when her muscles contracted during the first 2 months of pregnancy. Because of this her body actually reject he baby and about halfway through, she ended up w/ a still born. The doctors said that it was combination of her stature (4ft 11"), her self made sickness through stress, and her nervous habit of squeezing the muscles in her stomach and abdomen that did the baby in.

Love it!! Gonna hate to see this story end.