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Vegeta is always a delight in this fic. :3

It's totally understandable that Goku wouldn't be used to the baby bump. I suppose if no exit appears they could always do a c-section--but that would involve cutting him open and I'm sure that would frighten Goku.

Squee! Great chapter! I liked the first part, it was funny the way Vegeta was messing with Goku about his stature and his girly voice. Poor Goku XD I still feel sorry that he had his height stripped away from him, it's sooo hard thinking about him being shorter than VEGETA. *snorts*

Of course, Goku's come back was priceless! I think we would all prefer if the baby looks more like Goku. Hehe!

And also, the sex scene was good. But what the heck was Goku doing to the clothes? O.O Is it some kinda thing that happens to pregnant men where they're attracted to the smell or feel of something that reminds them of their mate? XD Or is he up to something else? *rubs chin* Maybe he's building a 'nest' made up of their clothes...LOL.

*cough*

Anyway, great chapter!

Love always,

Tabz.

Shirt theif! Baaad Ku-chan! lol awesome chapter, (But just WHAT was Goku doing in that closet?) PCS!

Goku stealing Vegeta's shirt...I wonder if he has something planned. Anyway, sorry for revealing plotbunnies. It was completely unintentional. I tend to think a lot when reading a story I like, and those thoughts end up in the review. I'll try to contain my internal musings! Loved the chapter and I am looking forward, as always, to the next update. Keep up the great work.

Wow, way to redirect Vegeta's attention away from the closet question, Goku. o__o; I still wonder what he was doing in there, though.

This chapter: Cute. Sexy. Erotic. Funny~

I want to rate it so much more than 5+s!

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Oh Vegeta. Him and his "dashing good looks". XD
Wonderful chapter.

Lol, vegeta's a pervy old man ^-^

Good chapter! :3
I enjoyed Vegeta's excitement at seeing the ultra-sound, and his delight/Goku's embarrassment at other uses for the warm gel.

Still worried about Goku's mental health, but I hope the others are able to help him through it.

Vegeta's so kinky...I mean, ultrasound gel? But I suppose it does have that warming property... I think you handled this chapter very well, with Vegeta finding out about Goku's problem. I have often wondered if Vegeta didn't also suffer some form of PTSD. I mean, as Victor pointed out to both Vegeta and Goku, sufferers could have vastly different symptoms, and I sometimes have thought that Vegeta's initial reluctance at making friends or being part of a group could be a form of it. Of course, this is purely fan based speculation in considering an angle of his character for writing purposes, and I have completely gotten off topic from this review. So, I am glad that he knows and I hope that Victor, Chi-Chi, Vegeta, and Bulma can help Goku recover from the disorder. I loved the ultrasound scene, especially with Vegeta guessing Goku's kidney's as the baby and then calling it ugly before realizing that it was the baby he was looking at and not the liver. Vegeta seems much more happy and excited about this child than he did about Trunks. Can't wait to read more!

I was thinking long and hard about what oneshots and stuff I want to write now that my story is finished...until I got distracted by your update. Curses!

Oh this chapter had me giggling. I loved the way Vegeta was pointing at the screen and asking if it was his baby only to be told it was a kidney...TWICE. Hahaha...and then when he really saw the baby, he didn't know what the hell it was! Ahahaha! Also...the gel...yeah, wow, Vegeta. You're such a pervert, for reals. Can't wait for the next update! ^^

Love always,

Talitha.