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Oops. I sent the review to the wrong story. *emo*

For THIS story, I meant to say:

On the one hand, Goku's behaviour seems totally irrational and stupid because his friends are obviously trying to help him. He wasn't betrayed by them, so there is seemingly no reason to distrust them. On the other hand, I can understand that he feels vulnerable and that experiences like the ones he went through can thoroughly damage a person's psyche. I only hope that Goku can get through this pregnancy without completely losing himself and distancing himself from the people who love him.

Wow, I feel sorry for Goku being pestered incessantly by Pan and Bra. He never gets a moments peace between them and his fears of being discovered and locked up in a lab. I hope Vegeta's idea works to help him overcome his lingering fear and sensitivity. I mean, it obviously can't be easy for Goku, not after realizing he had been pregnant once before and had spent years in a research facility. I hope your doctor is not like Dr. Villa. Well, looking forward to the next update.

Poor Goku :( Well I for one think his paranoia perfectly justifyed. Remember when Villa came to catch him the second time? He said that a tracking chip had been placed inside of him and so far as iv read Goku has told no-one about this. Hes probably too scared to beacause to get it removed would mean having an O-P-E-R-A-T-I-O-N. But now hes scared that someone still knows were he is and that the chip is telling them that he is pregnant.

Or I could be compleitly wrong and the chip was somewere close under the skin and Bulma removed it. In any case the tension created in this chapter was masterful. Rock on.

mother flucker, okay i'm going to do my best to make this review coherent through the pain because i can't just noot review, your story is too awesome for that.

alright goku was really strange in this chapter, his behavior is totally irrational! though i ddo see where hes coming from, i mean he's been through a lot and he's afraid of being tracked down by villa again. its a bit odd that his fears are clouding his ability to think clearly because they are just his friends, he should recognize that! so this leads me to believe that perhaps theres something else going on here.

pan and bra sort of annoyed me in this chapter but idid feel sorry for pan when goku yelled at her like that, i think that was a bit uncalled for even if she was being a pest. poor goku, for him to react in such a way, he must be really suffering. too bad i can't give him a hug.

um, damn, what else was i going to say? well, if it comes back i'll leave it in a review later. i hope everything turns out good for these two even though we all know some stuff is going to happen. some really bad, angsty stuff. i don't like that you've hinted at complications in his pregnancy! bad news, BAD NEWS. *runs away, flailing arms

love always,

tabz.

i look forward to every time u post a new chapter.. ur my monday.. i check back from noon till 10 pm. ur story is the best, totally new and different. and the emotion are portrade perfectly, everyones mood. i've read and re-read ur story sometimes just because im soo impatient.

keep it going. i cant wait till next monday!!

I really enjoyed this chapter, even if I still don't trust Shinji. I guess Goten and I have a lot in common there. ;) I hope that Goten will be able to resolve some of his issues with Trunks soon!

Pan and Bura's 'Goku pregnancy log' cracked me up. XD

Oh man, things are getting intense again; but I really enjoy the intensity in this fic (series?) now. Poor Goku's got a lot of medical issues to work through. I hope he doesn't need that C section.

I used to really enjoy this story alot. I loved the plot of it all in the beginning and the angst, but now... I feel like you are just trying to drag it out. I thought this story was about Goku and the evil doctor/whatever he was considered, and vegeta trying to get the saiyan to overcome his fear of people and touch and stuff... and that's it. Not this other stuff. I'm sorry. I've lost my interest in this story completely.

--Android22

Whoa! Wasn't expecting THAT at all. O_O (About Goku conceiving before). Surprises are good plotline-wise though; and that makes sense. :3

Hmmm...I wonder if Vegeta is hinting at something when he tells Goku that he'll need more than a few cookies to replenish his energy. Okay, so my mind is in the gutter. Anyway, this was a terrific chapter. It makes me want to kill Dr. Villa myself for being so...evil. Vegeta is right, though. I think Goku would be in much worse shape if he would have realized he was capable of conceiving a child and that he had actually become pregnant before this current incident. I hope things work out for the Saiyan duo as they prepare for the child. Looking forward to the next update.