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for In Your Dreams

by CrimsonTide

person Anon
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN. Why do I get the feeling Goku is going to be pregnant from this? I don't know how to react! Good or bad thing? GOOD OR BAD THING? AHHH *rips at hair*

But maaan, that lemon was HAWT! I wasn't actually expecting it but it was definitely a nice surprise. Very sexy :D I sure hope they don't regret doing what they did later on, if Goku does get pregnant from it and they don't like it. That would be totally just...eugh! I hope new problems don't arise or something. Oh well, does this mean Vegeta can come back now? And Trunks too?

I hope so!

Awesome chapter, thanks for making it so juicy!

Love always,

Talitha.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It was about time. I'm amazed that Goku and Vegeta survived as long as they did resisting each other. Does this unintentional yet intentional coupling spell a baby coming along? I can't wait to find out!
person Kakrot
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its awesome. Your a great writer ^_^
person Kaysha33
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello once again,
I truly think you are wicked ;-) as I said before on deviantart. I can't wait to read more... (I know, I know, I'm repeating myself here :-))
Poor poor Goku... you TRULY like to torture him (needles?)
How about you? Are you in Kansas by now?
Seriously, I hope you and your family are okay...
person fyrbyrd
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arrrghhhhh!!!!!! I hate needles too, Can't wait to read more, and yes the scream was for the end and not the needles, thanks.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gahhH! evil!! EVIL!!!!
person Chuquita
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a cliffhanger. X3
And we all know who that is because there's only one person who calls him that. :D

Much love for Goku and Bulma's interaction in the beginning of the chapter. I was almost worried Goku would go oozaru when he jumped out the window. ^^;
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*looks embarassed* Oh, allright, so condoms wouldn't have worked. It was worth a try though, don't you think? Oh dear, I think Kakarotto and Vegeta just got into trouble - again...
*pokes Crimson Tide* Challenge? You? Participate? Hm? www.darkserapha.de/challenge Puuuhleeeeeeeaaaaazeee?
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't hate you, but...such a cliffhanger! I take it Vegeta couldn't stay away, and after witnessing Goku's little exhibition in the woods, I'm sure neither one of them are going to be able to resist each other. I feel badly for Goku. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. Hopefully a little loving from Vegeta will help him out. Looking forward to the next update, and I really do hope that you don't blow away to Kansas:)
person lacrymosa-angel
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww going through heat sounds horrible :S i feel sorry for poor goku :(
hehe i knew vegeta was gonna turn up (at least i'm assuming that's who it is...who else calls him Kakarrot and is still living?) ARGH!! i can't wait to find out what happens next!! Will there be a lemon??
Either way, this story ROCKS!! XD

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