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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
O.O Wow! I was speechless there for a while. This chapter was so thrilling. It got me so hooked till the end. It was like watching one of those actions movies. You have a knack to writing action scenes, the detail was amazing. You have me all worried for a while when the chip was found by Villa and they got on the road, I was all screaming "No, no, no, how will the others find them now." The idea of the two saiyans being at the nercy of the diabolic doctor without any way out was blood-curdling. Hahah, I wasn't expecting that a silly tune would become their salvation, genial touch.
I agree with they don't having sex in the lab and for forced motives. It wouldn't be fair to Goku after all he's been through over the years. And I'm glad Vegeta would think so. Goku deserves to live a beautiful love story, with the proper wooing from his prince and to know what means to be really loved awww, sorry for going all sentimental here ^.^
O.O Wow! I was speechless there for a while. This chapter was so thrilling. It got me so hooked till the end. It was like watching one of those actions movies. You have a knack to writing action scenes, the detail was amazing. You have me all worried for a while when the chip was found by Villa and they got on the road, I was all screaming "No, no, no, how will the others find them now." The idea of the two saiyans being at the nercy of the diabolic doctor without any way out was blood-curdling. Hahah, I wasn't expecting that a silly tune would become their salvation, genial touch.
I agree with they don't having sex in the lab and for forced motives. It wouldn't be fair to Goku after all he's been through over the years. And I'm glad Vegeta would think so. Goku deserves to live a beautiful love story, with the proper wooing from his prince and to know what means to be really loved awww, sorry for going all sentimental here ^.^
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i never would have thought Trunks would be so obssessed...and sly enough to actually try and get Goku while he was with Goten and Gohan, baka XD last 2 chaps were really good, i loved the glittery hair bit, made me giggle ^_^
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah! you left me hanging.....-.-. i wanna hear the talk between Goku and Vegeta. XO maybe itll lead to some nice Saiya-jin smex??? XD one can always hope.
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta handled that awesomely! X3 And way to go Gohan and Goten for stopping Trunks before he could do something beyond his control. I think a Capsule Home is an excellent solution to this. :3
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah.. it's been a while since I checked by and man, have I missed some tasty tidbits. Mmmh. I'd love to see you participate in my canon to fanon-challenge, by the way. There's some nice prizes to be won, and of course you'd make me very happy. *grins* All the details are here: www.darkserapha.de/challenge
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't draw Goku T-T tried and fail miserably! **sigh**
J-chan
J-chan
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta understanding.....hmmm.....there's a new concept. I like it!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Baha! BRILLIANT chapter. I wasn't expecting ANY of that to happen and it was such a surprise, in a good way. I was kind of wondering when Trunks would do something to cause the tension to rise.
I loved the way you described Vegeta at the beginning of the chapter. The way he was muttering to himself and slashing his tail was just too brilliant of an image. I also liked the way he looked at Goku's glittery hair with distaste. It is so just like him to act that way towards anything with a feminine appeal.
People sniffing around Goku is also a funny thought. I liked the way Bulma just HAD to go off and experiment with the scent. Candles? Honestly. She's a strange woman.
I'm glad Gohan and Goten were there to protect Goku. If he had been by himself he would've been attacked for sure, considering he can't go Super Saiya-jin anymore. I felt sorry for Trunks though; he's a good guy but just couldn't help himself. Luckily Vegeta didn't completely lose it. I would hate to read about him killing his own son.
Awesome chapter. I was so waiting for an update and I got happy when I saw you added a chapter!
I loved the way you described Vegeta at the beginning of the chapter. The way he was muttering to himself and slashing his tail was just too brilliant of an image. I also liked the way he looked at Goku's glittery hair with distaste. It is so just like him to act that way towards anything with a feminine appeal.
People sniffing around Goku is also a funny thought. I liked the way Bulma just HAD to go off and experiment with the scent. Candles? Honestly. She's a strange woman.
I'm glad Gohan and Goten were there to protect Goku. If he had been by himself he would've been attacked for sure, considering he can't go Super Saiya-jin anymore. I felt sorry for Trunks though; he's a good guy but just couldn't help himself. Luckily Vegeta didn't completely lose it. I would hate to read about him killing his own son.
Awesome chapter. I was so waiting for an update and I got happy when I saw you added a chapter!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mwhahahaha! Chuquita's mental image came true! Two golden warriors, one defending Gokus honor and the other crazed with lust for him. Its a classic black knight and wight knight scene!
*Deep Breathes*...*Evil Grin*...ok, psycho moment over... Vegetas understanding and compasion for how Trunks was awesome, as was trunks indepth veiw of his feelings, both very manly.
40th chapter and over 300 reveiws, you go girl! :)
*Deep Breathes*...*Evil Grin*...ok, psycho moment over... Vegetas understanding and compasion for how Trunks was awesome, as was trunks indepth veiw of his feelings, both very manly.
40th chapter and over 300 reveiws, you go girl! :)
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!! Thank you so much for writing it, it is my favourite fanfiction out of any i've ever read! Sorry I'm only reviewing now...I started reading from when you had chapter 35 or so done and i've been meaning to review but i suck at reviewing on time lol however i promise to try harder.
Goku is sooo cute in this story how could you NOT fall in love with his cuteness?? Evil Mean scientists hurting kaka-chan!! You had me scared for a while when you had him second thinking his relationship with vegeta and then left it at a cliff-hanger! But everything turned out ok yaaaaay!!
HAHA i knew Trunks was gonna cause trouble...but at least he's sorry, I like Trunks and didn't want him to be mean :D I can't wait to see what happens next!! seriously! XX
Goku is sooo cute in this story how could you NOT fall in love with his cuteness?? Evil Mean scientists hurting kaka-chan!! You had me scared for a while when you had him second thinking his relationship with vegeta and then left it at a cliff-hanger! But everything turned out ok yaaaaay!!
HAHA i knew Trunks was gonna cause trouble...but at least he's sorry, I like Trunks and didn't want him to be mean :D I can't wait to see what happens next!! seriously! XX