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That was really cute, the image of Goku having a makeover with his granddaughter and Bura. Vegeta, apparently, didn't think it was such a great thing though. He's finally going into heat! Just like Bulma, I'm curious to see how 'interesting' things are going to develop as he proceeds and what Vegeta will do (if he will attempt to keep Goku from getting pregnant, even though he would really like another child).

Ah, finally got around to reading this one, I quite liked what you've written so far. It's fun, a little bit quirky, but in a well developed way. I find it interesting that you've spent less time describing what took place in the lab than you have the effects they've had; you focus on the now almost exclusively even though the past is relevant, a delicate and unique touch.

I'm looking forward to seeing how Vegeta handles Goku's new dilemna :P The pampering and butterfly clips were especially funny, I was killing myself laughing when Goku wanted the girls to finish his nails! Keep it up, I like the light hearted mood you've got going here.

300th reveiw! And Vegetas perception of Pan and Bura's pampering was hilarius, Im now so totaly begging you to draw Vegetas face at the part when he walks in sees Goku with all the glitter and clips in his hair LOL. Now im wondering what other strange things Goku will do as he goes into heat :P Good chapter, cant wait for the next.

I'm ridiculously tempted to draw Goku with his hair pulled back now. XD

This was a fun chapter; and I definitely agree with Bulma at the end about it going to be "interesting". Luv'd Vegeta's reaction to Goku with the mudpack on his face. XD

.....GAH EVIL!
J-chan

Yes! New chapter. Made my grueling day a little brighter. That was like the first thing I checked for when I got home :D and you did not disappoint. The idea of Goku having butterfly clips in his hair isn't actually that strange. He and butterflies go well together (as they seem to have some WEIRD attraction to him). Poor Vegeta. I laughed when he broke the doorknob off the door. For some reason that was just SO funny.

Also, Trunks is making things interesting. I always kinda wondered about him. TrunksxGoku is actually one of my favorite pairings, a couple above VegetaxGoku but sigh we all know it won't happen in this story :P And Goku's in heat :O Will Trunks try to make a move? Well, I'll be rooting for Vegeta of course ^^

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.

god that was evil >.<~ I'm ganna be so destracted at work tomorrow O.-
J-chan

Poor Goku, he can't go ssj anymore TT_TT
Though it does make sense from a medical standpoint.
Vegeta's advice to him was hilarious (go blow something up, you'll feel better).

So Trunks is a rival now? O_O

I agree with Goku, Vegeta could easily defeat Trunks in battle. (Though I get this funny two knights in armor fighting each other over the hand image. XD )

Mmmmm ... tasty! I love how you wrote that. When are you going to get to all the stuff you had planned BTW? I second Chuquita's mental image but I also get one of Trunks chasing Goku around Capsule Corp XP lol. Mabe xxChiChixx will do some doodles when she gets back from florida,:) her work is fab! so was the last few chapters.Rock on.

Oh I love reading that position, scrumptious!

Nice to see Goku in control for change now he's so weak and helpless :( Maybe it cheered him up a bit.