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OOOOOO YEAH, RIDE GOKU RIDE.
*_* I really (i think I'm really a stalker now) love this fic, and your style!

holy geebus, I am lovin this story! Ive alreday read it twice, just for kicks. ^_^ and i loved the last chapter with the positions and stuff. hilarious and smexy all in one. XD

Ooh. I love you. You wrote one of my favorite positions for sex. Not many people write this one for yaoi couples, and I always wondered why. It's hot. When Goku asked Vegeta if he could be on top, I knew he was referring to this. Still, I think Goku should get a chance to REALLY top Vegeta some time. Maybe as a one-time thing just so he can say he topped his top :P

Great chapter. It was juicy and the sex scene was good :D It's rare that I find ones I like to read.

I love you really much *_*
And I love your goku and vegeta even more...
(and don't make me hate trunks pleaseeeee ç_ç)

your mean to veggie he wants some steamy shower love! lol....>.> though.......if Bunny cooks as well as people say.... >_< I'd leave my redhead in the shower too.......
J-chan

Skee
J-chan

x] This was a reaaaallllyyy good chapter. I mean, I read it twice. :D Couldn't get enough of it!

I really like how the dinner went. This developing Trunks/VegetaxGoku love triangle that's developing is really interesting and I'm really eager to see where it goes. Vegeta's foreshadowing some intense plot twists in the future!

The blowjob was amazing. X3 I laughed aloud at the end (both times) when Vegeta said 'Holy shit'. Heee~ Iloveyou.

The bonus chapter was cute! I really enjoyed reading it. This one was nice too, of course! I never really thought Trunks would show an interest in Goku. It certainly does make an interesting love triangle. Goku's also reacting to the news that he can never be a Super Saiyan quite well. Looking forward to see what you've got cooked up for the next chapter!

I'm worried that Trunks is making a play for Goku. What if he overpowers him during Goku's heat. I'd hate to see Goku forced against his will again after all he's been through. Back off Trunks!

Sad to see Goku accepting he can't go SS anymore without much of a fight. He says he's tired of being the hero, but I'm still wishing he can re-gain the ability. Maybe after a couple of cubs :)

Goku's first unforced blow-job was hot, loved him exploring Vegeta. Vegeta certainly enjoyed it too as he nodded off afterwards lol.

I like your story. I've been following it for little while now. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this...I never get much time on the computer these days. Anyway, I like how cleverly done the story is. I never completely saw GT (I got bored about twelve episodes in) but I like how you incorporated the plot into this story and made it work. I also like the pairing Vegeta/Goku. Not my favorite but still an interesting pairing.

The only thing that kinda bugs me is the way you write Goku. He seems more like an angsty teen than the gentle hero I came to know. Buuut you have explained that people don't go through experiences such as these and come out alright and perfectly the same. I think you have Vegeta's character down though. :D

Also, your sex scenes are all rather similar so they get kind of boring but that's not a big problem for me. I usually skip sex scenes anyway...unless they are absolutely crucial to the plot and I'd be completely lost if I don't read it.

Grammar could use some work too...but that's about all I can think of. Good work on writing such a long and complex story! Hope to see a new chapter soon.