rate_review Reviews

I have been following this story for a while. I love goku vegeta pairing--doesn't matter who's on top as long as these two are together, I am a happy bunny.

You writing style is very gripping I really enjoy how you unravel the plot. Only thing troubled me now is Goku's character is quite OCC to me. He is gentle but never weak. He is free like wild, but also take responsibility when required, no matter how heavy it is. He is persistant as well, will try to think any possible little way to win, I simply can not imagine his resignate and cry in the corner. I love him dearly, seeing him cry would make me eat for days. Luckily in anime he never did.



However I guess everyone has a different interpretation of the story. I guess mine is quite different from yours. Thanks for the long lovely story. Must took a lot thinking. I wish you can return Goku his glory, not become just a attachment to vegeta. But it is just me. Don't worry. Write the story in your heart. That would be the best.

May praise be had to the 15 minute delay in computer shutdown!!! ...And of course the author herself :P

I'm sooo sorry for the delayed review! Okay! So. About Goku not being able to go SSJ again....POOR THING! After all thats been taken away from him, he's really losing it all! All he wants is to get back to his life, the way it was before Villa, but it seems like he never can. But being as young as he is, he's getting the chance to start over and try life again -- something some people dream they could do. But really, Goku losing his ability to fight and grow strong is like me losing my ability to draw! D: Oh god I would cry...

I really loved the last scene, though. Where he runs out of the shower to go help Bunny. "She lets me lick the bowl!!" I bet Vegeta was really thinking "I'll let you lick my---- D:!! " XD Ahh, priceless moments!

What I'm going to hate most about being away from my computer for a month is not being able to read this! ;^; I mean, I think some of the hotels have internet connection but I don't know for sure. KEEP UPDATING WHILE I'M GONE! If by some chance I cant get on, I want to come home to FOUR weeks worth of In Your Dreams goodness! You know I'll be looking forward to it.

I'm gonna go doodle nooowww. :3 -:: Smooch. ::-

the end is soooo sweet^^
"What about me?" Awwww, you´re truely a talent, i love this ff^^

Thank you very much for the continuation of ch35/bonus chapter. That was very generous of you and did make it seem more tied together at the end. You've done an excellent job once more, please continue to do so when you have the time.

*___________________* I loved the bonus! Can't wait to see the next chapter ^O^ you rule!

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Vegeta would extract revenge

Thats funny

:D

Haha, Vegeta must be kicking himself.

Nice to have a bit of comedy after the shocking revelation of the previous chapter, which I still haven't got over.

Goku and Vegeta sure seem to have a lot of bumps in their relationship. Every time something good seems to happen, something ends up being slipped out and Goku over reacts. However, I wouldn't see their relationship being sunny and full of understanding and happiness, considering Vegeta's track record with relationships and Goku's recent stint as a lab rat. It must have been devastating for him to realize that he can never be a Super Saiyan again. At least he realizes that Vegeta doesn't wish for him to be in that sort of position. It makes me want to kick Dr. Villa where it counts repeatedly. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oooooo poor goku *cuddles goku*
and poor vegeta, because he isn't really good at making a desperate goku see how he really feels ._.
poor babies ><
Can't wait to see the next one! (I was so happy that goku came back **)