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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hoy geebus, you have to finish this story! i dont even care if you update slow, but this has to be finished or ill never forgive you!!! TT.TT haha. this is the most awesome DBZ story ever, so keep it up!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Chapter 35 is here! ... and and and WTF! noooooo! not Gokus super-sayin-hood! please tell me hes gonna learn healing from Dende or or or get his dads precognitive abilitys somehow you cruel person!
Exellent fic so far btw, iv read it four times, not including the times iv went back to spesific bits. ROCK ON!!!
Exellent fic so far btw, iv read it four times, not including the times iv went back to spesific bits. ROCK ON!!!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo poor Goku. I love seeing him as Super Saiyan :( (as does Vegeta) Isn't there anything he can do? Dragonballs, Dende, Supreme Kai? Hell even try rubbing a lamp to find a genie to cure him.
I'm so saddened by this chapter *sobs*.
I'm so saddened by this chapter *sobs*.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goku can not turn supersaiyajin and he shouted to bulma. I feel Goku has turned into a woman. As much as I would like to see Vegeta X Goku story but I simply could not imagine Goku being so like.... chichi.
This story is very OCC.
This story is very OCC.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love this story so far. I'm only on chapter three, but this fanfic has definitely grabbed my attention. There are so many fanfictions out there that always tend to depict Vegeta as the one in Goku's situation. The evil scientists, the terrifying labs and crazy experiments. But you have turned Goku into a character...who really reminds me a lot of Vegeta! But I absolutely love how you have kept Goku still a bit playful and optimistic. I'm excited to read more and see how Vegeta and Goku draw closer. I'm also anxious to see what Goku had to go through and if he will ever be able to return to his good, happy-natured self. Ah, great story. I love it!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chi-Chi makes for a wonderful voice of reason. X3
How ironic she'll be the one to teach Goku about these things.
How ironic she'll be the one to teach Goku about these things.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!
YOU RULEEEEEEE
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAP! I like read 34 chaps in few hours without stoping!!!
I love what you did, without bashing any of chars!
YOU RULEEEEEEE
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAP! I like read 34 chaps in few hours without stoping!!!
I love what you did, without bashing any of chars!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaah you should have seen my reaction when I realized that chapter 35 wasn't up yet. I was all incensed. I mean, come on. you cannot just go into a scene like that and not continue it! i mean, that's just eeeevil! I so cannot wait until you post the next chapter. I am so loving this story!
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dear lord he's ganna give geta a heart attack XD this is ganna be great!
J-chan
J-chan
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I like how he went back to his little house! You really described the scenery well--with how old and worn everything was. It's so sad that Goku had to burn his bath-----.........
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IS THAT WHY HE BATHES IN A BARREL!? IN THE MOVIES? WITH WITH WITH WITH..WITH GOHAN? OUTSIDE? IS THAT WHERE THAT COMES FROM!? Oh man! That never even occurred to me until just now! O_O I always wondered what was up with that!
..>>; A-anyway. The doggy-style line cracked me up. X3 Very amusing. I wonder what Goku's going to learn from all of this.
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IS THAT WHY HE BATHES IN A BARREL!? IN THE MOVIES? WITH WITH WITH WITH..WITH GOHAN? OUTSIDE? IS THAT WHERE THAT COMES FROM!? Oh man! That never even occurred to me until just now! O_O I always wondered what was up with that!
..>>; A-anyway. The doggy-style line cracked me up. X3 Very amusing. I wonder what Goku's going to learn from all of this.