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for In Your Dreams

by CrimsonTide

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The thought of Chi-Chi giving Goku sex advice is somewhat strange, but hilarious at the same time. Looking forward to the next chapter to see how good her advice ends up being and if Vegeta appreciates it. I'm also curious to see if Goku and Vegeta's misunderstanding finally becomes clear. As always, looking forward to the next update.
person Simone
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was ... strange.
Chichi giving Goku sex advice ... is ... strange. Yes.

I also think its good if the Vegeta and Goku talked ... have a long, long talk. There's still so much for Goku to cope with, still so much unsaid that happened in the lab, still quite some trauma lurking in the shadows. They'll need time.
I think it might be best if they moved out of Capsule Corp. So they'll have time for themselves and get to know each other better, build a life, ...

Well, I'll just wait and see what you make of the story.

Regards,
Simone
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keepin' my fingers crossed that it's the 69 position he learns from ChiChi. *Grin*
person Zofo
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew, Goku got to shelter, I was worried he'd catch flu!

Strange image of Chichi explaining sexual positions to Goku. I always pictured her as very conservative, but I'm glad someone is explaining things to him and can't wait for him to put it into practice with Vegeta :-)
person Zofo
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nasty Gohan making Goku doubt Vegeta's love for him. Seems Gohan has a real problem about it, getting up on his high horse and preaching. Hope Vegeta finds Goku soon and makes him believe him again.

Poor Goku shivering in the rain unable to get home, he'll catch his death of cold.
person Chibi_Dilandau
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gohan is such a stick-in-the-mud =(
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goku is not better off by himself. Shame on Gohan for bringing up painful thoughts. I just want to scoop Goku up and give him a hug and tell him that everything will be alright. I know Vegeta didn't mean he wanted to control Goku the last time their passions got the better of them. And I'm sure Vegeta will be more then understanding about Goku's concerns (at least, I hope he would be). Goku's just afraid. Looking forward to the next chapter, even if it is filler.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is always one relative willing to unzip their pants and piss on your life and not feel bad about doing it. Great story BTW.
person Simone
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Great chapter, I really liked it. Gohan stirred some doubt in Goku, which I think was really important.
Goku needs time to think everything over, as things went somewhat fast lately. Everythings new and scary and he's still so vulnerable. I really can feel with him. I hope he'll train a lot to get his (high) ki back, this would make things a lot easier and would make Goku feel safer and more sure of himself. I always tend to think that, if SOMETHING happens, anywhere, and nobody happens to be around the once strongest fighter in the universe can't even defend himself against a stray wolf or something.

So pleaaasssseeeee (can you see me begging on my knees?!) let him get stronger soon! I think it would really be a good idea if he stayed alone in the forest for some time without anyone disturbing him. He could really need some time to think everything over and to find his own center/point of view/position. I'm really feeling with him, but I KNOW he's strong! Go, Goku!!
person Chuquita
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good! Oh I luv'd the foreshadowing of the storm. Poor Goku, he's so worried now.

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