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X3 I just gave you your 200th + ! Hehe.

That thunder storm scene at the end was really intense. I could see it so vividly. And it reminded me of what's going on outside of my window right now. .. If -only- Goku was out in that storm, so I could drag him in and dry him off---..ahem. ^^

Filler Chapter or not, I still loved it. Always enjoy your writing! I'm excited to see what your plans are for the future chappies!

Excellent symbolism in this chapter! I like how there was a person that objected. Cannot wait to see the next chapter.

Vegeta sure likes to say things without thinking them through. It must be that Saiyan pride of his. Oh well, it makes his relationship with Goku all the more interesting.

Hey CrimsonTide! Awsome job! Ive read all 32 chapters twice and never get tired! Clearly this is my fav on here....followed by Damned Traditions...this story rocks out loud...i wish it would never end! Ok now onto important matters....

I saw that you wrote that your suffering from writers block and have some ideas that id love to read...you knw wht would be nice....if a guy appears at this stage and starts obsessing over Goku...you knw like stalking...and Vegeta gets jealous and stuff....yea stuff like that...cause i love seeing Vegeta jealous!!!! Heheheh anyways update soon....you update real slow...no offense


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Danielle

Aww I loved Goku teasing Vegeta with his display in the river. Shows he's growing more confident around him.

But then he was mortified by what he'd revealed last night. So glad Vegeta was calm despite his inner annoyance and finally got him to believe he wasn't disgusted and truly loved him.

Looking forward to how he will make Vegeta pay for his comments to Bulma :-)

I've been watching this story for a little while--probably since about chapter sixteen? It's one of the few V/G fics that I keep up with. I like the pairing dynamic, but I'm leery of its fandom. There's just... too much, blatant OOC flying around, you know? So it pleased me to find this. I enjoy your attention to detail and how carefully you've crafted a loving relationship between them. Just thought I should let you know that, since I'm going to be sticking around.

Also, I'm shocked I didn't realize who you were, earlier. "Painfully Alone" was one of the first deviations I favorited when I switched over to a universal username. :)

"I'm YOURS!!!"

Omg.. perfect. Just loved that. this chapter was definitely hot. You gotta do more. ;]


--Android22

You handle these characters so well. Characterisation is the key to believable fanfiction. Any situation is possible as long as the characters respond according to their nature. At least I think so.

Bravo

I'd really love to see Vegeta regrow his tail.

Drunken IT, I always wondered what would happen. Where did they end up and was it nearer to civilization than they realized?

Those perverts in the lab have got me mad, no way was that just experimenting on Goku, forcing him to give them head like that. That's just exploitation from sick minds, grrrr.

Loved the dominant Vegeta in the lemon, making Goku say he was his. Hope Goku doesn't regret it in the morning.