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you know, i was re-reading the story and it came to my mind when i end it for 2nd time that you could write and epilogue of how Goku's friends took their relantionship. Maybe Chichi took it in the bad way or simple describing the surprise in everyone's face and how Vegeta and Goku hug each other when they seeing each other in the real and how they feel know that they are finally together in the real word, not in a vision.

i was thinking that maybe if you do an Epilogue you can write how Goku do to be the seme and how Vegeta take the dragon balls and wish being has youth has goku, XD i love when Goku as for being on top and that Vegeta said now misunderstanding the things jajaja that's why i said it. anyways i love both as seme and uke XD

OH MY GOD!!! Have you ever seen a twenty year old bounding around her room as if on drugs? To bad my computer doesn't have a webcam. Wow, that was one hell of a plot twist! One hell of a story!!! Normally there would be no way I could read a story with a submissive Goku, or a vegeta one (obviously this limits me greatly), but your story was awesome!!!! On par with the greatest fanfiction authors I've ever read!!! Wahhh, if you haven't already, you should definatly consider writing as a career possibility because this was AWESOME!!!

Ok, I'm done being a fangirl now.

or maybe not. I will definatly be reading this again!!! Keep it up!

Satsukifujin

Dear CrimsonTide a.k.a. Rourinu,

I... don't know what to say. I'm so moved by this story. The ending was so sad I cried when Vegeta realized it was all a dream. And I had a little clue before the ending it all was just a dream... But what a dream. It was so sad and hard to realize that those happening weren't real. :'<
But altogether; Maybe the best BejiKaka -fanfic I'v ever read. I think it IS the best I've ever read. <3 More stories like this! The world needs these kind of stories! :D
And this wasn't the only time I read IYD. I'll read it many times. <3 And I'd like to draw fan art of this, but I can't draw as well as Chii or GogetaCat or you... But anyway, at least I would try.

Love, Kojiita.
Keep it up. ^ ^

Wow didn't see that end coming! :) Loved it but I hope Vegeta and Kaka get Momoku :( She was such a cutie!! Great end to a great story!! Congrats!! :D

That was the best Fan Fic ever created. !.!

It could even be its own saga. =D

You've kept up with it no matter whats held you back.

You are talented and i hope you write more soon. =]

x

I read up to chapter 19 before I stopped. It started off as an intriguing story, good job on that. My only complaint so far is that you seem to be effeminating Goku more as the story progresses. Son Goku has always been my favorite character in Dragon Ball so I'm not overly fond of fanfiction that tend to make him more 'girly' than necessary. The pregnancy thing was what made me wrinkle my nose in distaste... it seemed to push the feminine thing even more.

In spite of this I do plan on reading more and I really like the story otherwise. I also like the way you handled Goku when he first escaped from Dr. Villa. Even though he's been through a lot I think you handled the way he dealt with it very well. The interaction with Vegeta was interesting too. Particularly when he gave him the finger after he first summoned Kintoun for him, lol.

I see that there are already 50 chapters in this fanfic! I can only hope things get better as I read more of the story. Hopefully Goku want be getting any girly than you made him though. ^^

What a weird ending...not sure what to make of it really lol. But all in all, I've so enjoyed reading this story =] Thanks for taking the time to finish it and update etc, unlike some fic writers. xx

Oh WOW! I did not see that coming at all! But it makes so much sense when I think about it given the title. O_O Everything came around full circle and even though I'm sad that Momoku was only part of the dream, I'm relieved that Vegeta will still get to rescue Goku in the end.

Wow wasn't expecting that ending! But it's been a fun ride, thanks for taking me along.Congrats on 24000 too!