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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How humiliating! But funny to read. I think, I was Goku, I would have crawled under the table. However, it appears that Goku's going to have his revenge. Looking forward to the next update!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more. I eagerly await the next chapter>
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely tender moment when Goku was watching Vegeta sleep and running through his feelings. Very touching.
I didn't think Goku would agree to the triple date, but Bulma was right to get him socializing again. Chichi and Victor seem accepting. However, it looks like Vegeta's in trouble from that look at the end. Next chapter should be fun, wonder what Goku will do to get his own back.
I didn't think Goku would agree to the triple date, but Bulma was right to get him socializing again. Chichi and Victor seem accepting. However, it looks like Vegeta's in trouble from that look at the end. Next chapter should be fun, wonder what Goku will do to get his own back.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
it is by far the best vg/gk EV-VAR!!! i read this thing for three weeks.. i love it!! sorry that it took soo long to review, but i'll explain that later.
im soo just.. wow-ed by the way u grabbed the characters.. its the best yet!! and i can actually see how goku is and its too cute! and u update the MOSTEST, do u know that?? u are a great writer, but people must tell u think often huh? i just wanted to say, i wanted to read what u had and finally i will review.. cause that chapter had me spitting soda all over my kid and she cried.. soo GOOD JOB!! u got my attention and soo much more, mostly stick computer.. lol! everytime my keyes stick now, i think about u.. lol!
my kid makes it hard to read and review.. she helps me hit the keyes.. but well she is have a hard time with the soda incident. so i have a moment.
this story is soo well written and descriptive. u have emotions down pat.. i mean vegeta is actually vegeta.. and goku is soo perfect.. if only this was a anime. ooo god.. **nose bleed** lol!! just so's u know's its too perfect, and addictive.. i come on everday and check to see if u made an update. its my poison of choice on aff.net and wow! what a choice..
ThankYou!!
higan
it is by far the best vg/gk EV-VAR!!! i read this thing for three weeks.. i love it!! sorry that it took soo long to review, but i'll explain that later.
im soo just.. wow-ed by the way u grabbed the characters.. its the best yet!! and i can actually see how goku is and its too cute! and u update the MOSTEST, do u know that?? u are a great writer, but people must tell u think often huh? i just wanted to say, i wanted to read what u had and finally i will review.. cause that chapter had me spitting soda all over my kid and she cried.. soo GOOD JOB!! u got my attention and soo much more, mostly stick computer.. lol! everytime my keyes stick now, i think about u.. lol!
my kid makes it hard to read and review.. she helps me hit the keyes.. but well she is have a hard time with the soda incident. so i have a moment.
this story is soo well written and descriptive. u have emotions down pat.. i mean vegeta is actually vegeta.. and goku is soo perfect.. if only this was a anime. ooo god.. **nose bleed** lol!! just so's u know's its too perfect, and addictive.. i come on everday and check to see if u made an update. its my poison of choice on aff.net and wow! what a choice..
ThankYou!!
higan
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Vegeta said he didn't want to go so you just have to pay the price for making him do what he does not want to do. Plus he is PAINFULLY honest!
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute chapter! I hope to see an update in the imeadiate future.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. :3
This is going to be an awkward dinner, I can tell. XD
Loved Vegeta in this chapter. ^u^
This is going to be an awkward dinner, I can tell. XD
Loved Vegeta in this chapter. ^u^
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh-heh. X3
That was an awesome chapter.
That was an awesome chapter.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Typical way for Vegeta to stop Goku, by tripping him up. I could just picture the expressions, made me laugh.
Great description of Goku's needle phobia, how it was irrational but you can't help your body reacting to it. I also have a phobia (not of needles) so could really relate to it. Glad Vegeta could calm him down and distract him. Also glad Goku isn't pregnant yet as I feel they need more time together, just the two of them, and Goku needs to come to terms with everything that's happened to him.
Sorry you have had personal problems, update when you can.
Great description of Goku's needle phobia, how it was irrational but you can't help your body reacting to it. I also have a phobia (not of needles) so could really relate to it. Glad Vegeta could calm him down and distract him. Also glad Goku isn't pregnant yet as I feel they need more time together, just the two of them, and Goku needs to come to terms with everything that's happened to him.
Sorry you have had personal problems, update when you can.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEE chapter 12 = intense love. i read it this afternoon and the whole rest of the day i couldn't stop thinking about it, which made me pretty crappy company for my friends, i'm sure, but i don't care! and i just read it again just now and it's just...i have no words, i love it, you've captured the raw emotion so fully, it's perfect.
have to go read the rest now, just had to say something about chapter 12 xDD
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have to go read the rest now, just had to say something about chapter 12 xDD
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