rate_review Reviews

I'm glad for Goku's sake that he isn't pregnant. I think it would have really thrown him for a loop. And I enjoyed the Goku/Vegeta interaction. Vegeta seems to be able to say just the right things to make Goku feel better (when he isn't being an emotional retard). Talking about their strange phobias was great. I always found it amusing that both Goku and Vegeta would be afraid of such inane things, considering how powerful they are. Looking forward to the next update as always!

Why does the image of Vegeta purchasing condoms at a drugstore make me laugh so much? XD

Thank you for the great chapter! :3 I'm very appreciative and sorry you've been going through such a rough spot. :<

I'm glad that you had Goku be physically too young for the children. ^^; As much as I adore my VegeGoku babies, I don't think Teen!Goku should be having them. xP So very good work with securing that.

I loved how you described Goku's panic attack. I've said this many times before, and I'll say it again, YOU ROCK AT DESCRIPTION. X3

The worm scene was funny. Poor Vegeta. XD You're always really good at portioning just the right enough of humor and suspense into each chapter~!

So many places to laugh. Bulma, Vegeta and Goku all had their moments. I also noticed you controlled your POV! I never once had to wonder who was thinking what.

On a darker note I'm very sorry to hear about your friend's boyfriend.

I completely understand. Supporting your friends should always come first. Thank you for fiding the time through it all in order to post anything.

XD 'throw away the condom ...'

Mmm Goku's refusal to be pregnant so soon also fit with the faq that he is physicaly 18 and well, not at the top of his form.

But for Vegeta, it is also the chance to have a real saiyan+a proof of his mating with Goku.

I want to see more of all your stories :D

Your story is so great, with all the plot twists, never know what´s around the corner.
I love long DB stories and male pregnancy.
Keep going I can´t wait for the next chapter. I check the side every day.
Pretty Pleeeeaaaase.
(sorry english isn´t my mother tongue, I allways don´t know how to say what I want to say.)

Okay, here is my email address : yukiko_angel_demon@hotmail.com and here is me screaming of outrage since I started that fiction.

the story is simply captiving, and how some humans, even after Goku saved them so many time, only saw him as an animal.

the Vegeta and Goku smex (giggle) but all the problem Vegeta is facing since he deosn't know how to correctly react!

Oh god, I want more and probably an email for when your next chapter is up!

(PS : Learned from it via Y!Gallery)

What is it with all my fav authors and plot bunnies?? Lol, prince with a face full of dirt XD
J-chan

Awww, you're mean (like always :-) )
Stopping at such a point. I'm DYING to see Goku's reaction and IF HE'S REALLY PREGNANT?!!
If so, I hope you're not making him overly ... you know ... female. You know, having mother instincts and building a nest and all this.
I don't really like those stories where either him or Veggie are pregnant and they're changing in some sort of female just happening to have a penis. They're men and they should act like one, pregnant or not.

Anyway, I'll be true to you no matter how the story'll go on. I'm confident it will be awesome (no matter if Goku turns into a baby machine or not *gg*

As usual you made me giggle so many times. And I do like to laugh.