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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"And that's when Goku panicked." - Nice way to end the chapter. XD
I can only imagine what he'll do next. I'm so glad they're a couple now! :D!!
I can only imagine what he'll do next. I'm so glad they're a couple now! :D!!
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor sore Goku (giggles). Nice morning after bath scene, very sweet.
Understandable that Goku was feeling less of a man and expecting to have to be like Chichi as she's his only reference. I laughed at the bit where he was imagining himself hoovering with a baby. Glad Vegeta reassured him.
Goku is afraid of the others reactions, I'm wondering if it will be all plain sailing. Can't see them all accepting and being pleased for them.
So Goku could be pregnant but is unsure he wants kids yet. This could be tricky.
Understandable that Goku was feeling less of a man and expecting to have to be like Chichi as she's his only reference. I laughed at the bit where he was imagining himself hoovering with a baby. Glad Vegeta reassured him.
Goku is afraid of the others reactions, I'm wondering if it will be all plain sailing. Can't see them all accepting and being pleased for them.
So Goku could be pregnant but is unsure he wants kids yet. This could be tricky.
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another excellent chapter, that nicely brought a head some of the issues that both Vegeta and Goku will have to deal with in their new relationship. I enjoyed the added perception of how and what Goku might think of his role in his relationship with Vegeta, and his concerns about what his family might think. I can see how the pregnancy issue could be a big deal for him and now that you left it at such a cliffhanger, I look forward to reading the next chapter next week or so. Thanks!
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I wonder how Piccalo and Krillin will react to the news......
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally in love with this fic! And about other people complaining about Goku being too OOC? I totally agree with you, of COURSE he's gonna be completely different than he is in the series under the circumstances. Duh! Gosh, some people. Lol. Anyway, love your writing, can't wait for the rest! :D
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....your evil knows no bounds...but it was worth it! 26 chapters tell we finally got to the steamy action and your still going! Are you fuled by like rockets or something?!? Your crazy! hehehe
J-chan
J-chan
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! You are the best!
Finally they're together! I'm really happy for them - and glad that in the end everything turned out fine.
*dances around happily*
The lemon was just awesome. The way you described everything was just incredible and it was really worth the long wait.
Did I mention that you are the best?
*keeps on dancing*
Finally they're together! I'm really happy for them - and glad that in the end everything turned out fine.
*dances around happily*
The lemon was just awesome. The way you described everything was just incredible and it was really worth the long wait.
Did I mention that you are the best?
*keeps on dancing*
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I have been enjoying this story all along, sorry for not reviewing eariler. I love it, so keep up the good work.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion Goku is definitely not OOC. It is the art of the fanfic writer to embrace canon characters and then show their growth in a believable way throughout the story according to the situations they meet. You have done this.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad they didn't break the bond, I was worried that Vegeta had blown it, and Goku wouldn't give him another chance to break his heart.
That lemon was truly beautiful and well worth the wait. So passionate and caring plus extremely hot! The inclusion of the mirror was genius, and I loved the part where Goku's insecurity about his strength showed and how Vegeta reassured him.
So they're finally mated. That must mean more hot lemons to come. Yes! Oh and the patter of tiny feet (or should that be paws) soon.
xxx
That lemon was truly beautiful and well worth the wait. So passionate and caring plus extremely hot! The inclusion of the mirror was genius, and I loved the part where Goku's insecurity about his strength showed and how Vegeta reassured him.
So they're finally mated. That must mean more hot lemons to come. Yes! Oh and the patter of tiny feet (or should that be paws) soon.
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