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Poor Goku, he was so embarrassed when the girls were teasing him, I was like awwwwww, but it was very funny. The little seduction scene at the water park was very cute and I loved how you ended it with a pinch. The image of Goku using his tail as a propeller also had me laughing.

Goku makes an adorable drunk doesn't he, he was putty in Vegeta's hands but Vegeta was the perfect gentleman. Not something he does often so it showed his resolve to take it at Goku's pace and also how much he loves him.

So Goku's not against having cubs, I did wonder, but he still thinks a bit like a human and believes it's strange. He obviously wants to be with Vegeta now but I hope he doesn't think Vegeta only wants him for that.

omg! please update again soon, will goku remember what he said? will vegeta buy him flowers? and what gender will their child be? these questions need answers!

That was so cute!

A sick Vegeta is not a very happy Vegeta and now he's messed things up with his jealousy. Poor Kakarotto!

A jealous Vegeta would be quite uncomfortable, but I know that he would never deliberately hurt is little Kakarotto. At least in this story, he wouldn't. The beach scene was really cute. I never imagined sunscreen being used in such a sexy way. 10 points for Bulma's ingenuity and Vegeta's daring! Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hi!

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapters ^^
Anyway ... finally (after another stupidity to add to Veggies already quite long list) some progress.
I'm really glad you made Goku regain his voice (we want to hear him moan and scream, right *g*).

What I'm wondering is what's about all those henchman of Dr. Villa. I'm not really sure we're all done with them, yet. I mean, OK, the King's dead, but ... well, the king is dead, long live the king, right? (it's a german saying, I don't know if you really CAN translate it like this into English ... anyway)...

Well, I really hope everything will go upwards from here on, but somehow I've got a bad feeling about this.

Looking forward to another update!

PS: it's really great of you to add this little 'wooing' :-)

Nice to see Kakarot still considers Vegeta a potential mate even though he's mad at him. Loved their banter as well.

Some wooing, yippee!

Oh that was so cute with the sunblock, surprised no one noticed though I suspect Piccolo did.
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That bit about the sunscreen was really cute. Thanks for updating once more, it's nice to have a pure fluff chapter every so often. Please update when convenient!

Yay, wooing! Awwwr.. that was nice! But oddly.. I think I liked Goku better mute... o.O (yes, I'm evil, why do you ask?)

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that was so sweet! I loved it! Cant wait to see more!