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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta's first cold, or should that be man-flu, was so funny, especially the 'kill me now' part. It was just how I would imagine him acting. That's some cough medicine to be able to knock Vegeta out though, must be Bulma's special Saiyan strength batch.
There was always the danger that Vegeta's temper could spiral out of control and upset Goku, but glad he's got his voice back. Vegeta will have to tread carefully and be extra nice to him now.
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There was always the danger that Vegeta's temper could spiral out of control and upset Goku, but glad he's got his voice back. Vegeta will have to tread carefully and be extra nice to him now.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wails* where's the wooing?
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The wooing is coming, I promise!! This set it up so Vegeta would HAVE to pull out all the stops :P
Woo, woooooooooo!
Woo, woooooooooo!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally Dr Villa got what he deserved! I am glad he is dead. I hope that the two now can come together with no treat over their heads. A very great story.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bleh, finally the jerks gone...god why is "Ding Dong the Witch is Gone" in my head?!? @.@
J-chan
J-chan
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks so much for updating so soon. Excellent job on this latest chapter, i can't wait for the next one!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dr. Villa met a fitting end. I couldn't see Vegeta doing anything less than torturing the man the way he tortured Goku. An eye for an eye statement seems to come to mind. I was a bit shocked that Goku actually shot the man in the head, seeing how forgiving he could be in the show. However, I do recall him doing the deed when the bad person wouldn't repent from the evil ways, so I shouldn't be that surprised. Dr. Villa was evil incarnate. Looking forward to the next chapter and the wooing!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, Dr. Villa finally got his comeuppance! *does happy dance* Loved how they both had a hand in it and Goku had the last word so to speak.
Was very sweet at the end with Goku scared he would be trapped and obligated as he was with Chichi, but Vegeta played it just right, letting him know his feelings and wishes but not being too dominant.
As you said, let the wooing begin *starts bouncing in seat*.
Was very sweet at the end with Goku scared he would be trapped and obligated as he was with Chichi, but Vegeta played it just right, letting him know his feelings and wishes but not being too dominant.
As you said, let the wooing begin *starts bouncing in seat*.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAYFORSLOWANDGRUELINGDEATHS!!! :D
I throughly enjoyed reading Vegeta murder Villa...and the fact that Goku got the last shot in made it even better! I laughed when he couldn't let the gun go.
And Yaaaaaaaay. Goku's back in his original clothes! :3 Me likey.
And now on to the wooing. ... >>; Wooing would be better with a voice, though..and well..it has been 20 chapters...I think Dende's lonley.... -:: Cough, cough. Nudge, nudge. ::- xD
I throughly enjoyed reading Vegeta murder Villa...and the fact that Goku got the last shot in made it even better! I laughed when he couldn't let the gun go.
And Yaaaaaaaay. Goku's back in his original clothes! :3 Me likey.
And now on to the wooing. ... >>; Wooing would be better with a voice, though..and well..it has been 20 chapters...I think Dende's lonley.... -:: Cough, cough. Nudge, nudge. ::- xD
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March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just really had to say this. I loved the fact you used the piccolo song and how pissed off he got. It was a priceless stroke of genius. I also love how the story is currently progressing. It is very interesting and I look forward to reading more.