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for In Your Dreams

by CrimsonTide

schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHISTLING FOR THE WIN! hehehehe
J-chan
person Nikikeya
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heehee Piccoro Daisuki!!! Lol.


Wooing? ::Shakes her head::

Translation: it will be five more chapters before they [i]get it on![/i]

Cause they have to do that whole one step forward, three steps back thing again! Can't they just be like Redkatts Saiyans and Screw for the sake of screwing? e___e;

But no thats not very romantic.... Funny as hell. But not romantic.

I can remember, are Goten and Trunks togather in this? What about Gohan and Piccolo.

Gohan: You know if I was with Piccolo-san and we ever tried for kids... I'd probably end up laying an egg...

Trunks: And then the kid's name would have to be Omlette. ::snicker::
person Chuquita
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was AWESOME! I luv that idea, whistling to get Piccolo and the others' attention. X3
I really like action-packed chapters like these.
This fic has been so much fun so far, and now that I know you can review without being a member, I shall. :3
Looking forward to the next chapter!
person 66Hiei08
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOoo.. You tease But then again, Vegeta trying to wooo Goku should be fun, lol. Please update soon. I'm into this story. I love DBZ, but for some reason I just can't seem to get my mind around writing anything from this series. So I "live" vicariously through others who write excellent DBZ. I want to see more DBZ/YYH X-Overs, Hahaha!!
person mgpem
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Piccolo-san daisuki! Oh, dang! I love that song! ...Piccolo's gonna have a nose...err, ear bleed.*grin*
BTW very nice work so far. I have to admit I was really surprised by the turn of events in the latest chapter, and quite pleased too. You see, I too want some WOOING! ^^;
person BullKitty
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, good thing they had Piccolo with them, or Goku and Vegeta woulda been screwed. Literally too of course, but it's alright by me if we have take a raincheck on the lemon, you're good for it.

^_^

Hee hee... you said "wooing"
person Simone
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally!
I knew you'd rescue them! Oh, that's just great! I hope everything will get better from now on and a very special someone gets the beating he deserves ... I'd be great if Goku regained some of his ki so he can do the beating up of Dr. Villa himself. But Vegeta doing it would be just as great ... oh, I love Vegeta as Prince in shining armour. He's so protective ... :-) ... that's just so .. sweeeeet! Awwww ... *sighs*

Lookin forward to the next chapter! I'm really relieved that you didn't write a lemon in the lab ... with Dr. Villa watching and everything .... yuck!
person Chichicken
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah, I always thought it would need log-in to comment to fics here but now I tried and noticed I can do it without xD I must say I LOOVEE YOUUR STOORYYY!!! This is best ever, seriously T_T and this chapter absolutely suprised me and well, I at least wasn't dissapointed that there wasn't any hot sex ;D
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
do you need a tonge to whistel?
person Mewmew2
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job on this chapter. I'm glad that you put wooing into the equation before the long anticipated lemon. Nevertheless, I like many others was awaiting it. Oh well. Please update again when convenient!

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