rate_review Reviews

Very nice. I enjoyed Goku's solution to his capture. It made me laugh.

*smiles* I think it was a good decision not to let the lemon happen in the lab. One, it threw us readers off track and I like me some surprises, and two, I want to see some wooing, too!

I was worried for a moment there when Dr. Villa found the device, as I thought the others would never find them once moved, so I'm breathing a huge sigh of relief. Neat idea for Goku to become a homing beacon, shows he's not as dumb as some perceive. Poor Piccolo's ears, though it was funny.

Yes I was looking forward to a lemon, and had my pitchfork ready to come after you when it didn't materialize, but I do love a bit of wooing too so I'll forgive you. Just don't keep me waiting too long.
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Yeah, I felt that as I read this the scenes were a lot faster and less detailed than usual. But hey, you got them out of the lab so now they're finally past that road bump!

I was wondering whatever happened to that chip! x3 I ADORE your clever ideas! I was so confused when Goku was whistling, ya know? I just stared and thought, "He's lost his mind...after all the years of torture..D: !!" but no! No! The whistling was for Piccolo! :DDDD So cool.

I agree, wooing is good! :3 Can't wait for the next chapter. Vegeta will be happy to get his power back.

Yes! Finally there out. Please let us see the wooing

I love your sense of humor!! I hope you get your wooing WOOING! Great story so far.

I thought it was great! You're right about the lab. I want some wooing too, and having forced wooing...poor Goku and Vegeta. I thought the idea of Goku whistling a tune that Piccolo would recognize was a great and original plot device. All I can say is that I hope Dr. Villa somehow managed to die in the inferno. He's a horrible and disgusting man and it drives me nuts how horribly he treats Goku and Vegeta when they are obviously intelligent beings with feelings. Of course, humans do that to themselves, so it shouldn't be that surprising. Still...I hope he's out of the picture and Goku and Vegeta can finally try to sort out their relationship.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *stomps feet* evil cliffhanger in a great story =D

oh. argh. evil!

Hmmm, Dr. Villa is evil, pure and simple. Poor Kakarrot, to think that Vegeta had rejected him when that isn't the case at all. Looking forward to the next chapter.