rate_review Reviews

to say, that story was amazing would be an understatement. I wish I could go on a little bit longer, because well it's a good story. But all good things must come to an end. I'll be looking for word to your next story. Later.

WHAT THE FRACK?! LAURYN!

oh yes Lauryn.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! i mean its kinda hard to be angry cause it fit so perfectly.

BUT I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU AFTER A YEAR AND A HALF DO THIS TO YOUR READERS!

no no i kid. You did a wonderful jump. Considering the last chapter made me cry, this more then made up for it. I still cant believe that you actually made Goku a dream. that they both dreamed it. I mean ..its totally better then wha happened in my head..but i make my stories end in angst this ended with a happy note...

An im going to kill someone MWA AHAHAHAH note. XD which is always pleasant. O.O and cause im all sorts of demanding. and you are all sorts of good at writing

I DEMAND a epilogue ...or something!!!! i mean..if its possible. but dont do it cause you have tdo it cause there is a reason.

WHATEVER now im rambling..cause i really cant express in words hw much i loved this story!

I LOVED IT SO MUCH! very good job and *-* write more stories......*whispers* make something involve Bardock XD

Oh bravo! A brilliant ending. Perfectly bittersweet. It just goes to show what can happen when a dream story is done well. There are many out there who could learn a thing or two from this.

Thank you very much for the adventure. It's been a rollercoaster.

OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THATS THE ENDING! Its all been a DREAM! *cries* poor Goku, he is still in that lab and Vegeta, he finally has his family and its no longer their. Please, Please, Please, Please have an epilogue with them together (maybe with Goku pregnant). *gives puppy dog eyes* Pretty please. Sighs

While the ending seemed so worng (and yet fairly right) the entire story was amazing! You are an incredibly talented writer and I could see you writing as a job! Fantastic job...I hope you continue writing and i can't wait to see what you come up with next. :)

This was a great story. I enjoyed every chapter. Sad to see it end, though.

Fantastic. I was a little worried at the next to last chapter, but this was a fabulous end to a wonderful story.

Hey! You're writing is so great! I loved this show as a kid and you're writing is just perfect; you are so great at making conversational dialogues and adding bits of humor to each piece.

I seriously think should consider writing as a part-time endeavor - as in, paid writing. I read in an earlier chapter note that you were going to Cosmo school, but should the opportunity for some sort of writing assignment present itself to you ... I wouldn't be afraid of it! You are so talented.

I can't wait to finish. I just started reading yesterday and I'm on chapter 9. Keep writing! You're doing a fabulous job! ^_^ <3

How mean!!!!!!
And just as I thought that it is FINALLY, after all that angst and bad luck, the happy end!
ANd now everything was just a dream?! Poor Vegeta.
But at last it gives them a change to be together without torturing and hurting and scearing Goku so much..
They will be together in the end, righ?
RIGHT?

You can't let them be alone without each other! (Well, you can, since you are the author, but I want to see a happy end, I like happy ends *whine*....)
PLease update soon, I ca't wait to see how it end, it was a really great, interesting story!!!!!

Well I didn't expect that, but on the other hand whereas in most stories I'd groan if this happened, here it feels right. And I have an incling not everything is as it seems. It's great to read your work again.

:gasps: No! No-no-no! You can't do that to them! Don't take Kakarrotto and Momoku away from Vegeta! Now it begs the question, just how much of it was a dream? Dear God, if it's the whole story, I'm honestly gonna cry....and I 'm not the type that cries often. Anxiously awaiting your next update.