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WAH! <3's for everyone ^-^ I saw chi's pic and went strait here to read the new chapter
J-chan

Oh, you're getting doodles, Missy. You're getting doodles.

I have to say.. my favorite line in this chapter had to be: “Hm. It would appear the dominant Saiyajin in a mated couple is extremely protective of his submissive, even at the expense of his own well-being. Take note of that.” XD Something about that made me crack up so much...

I also really liked the beginning with the Z fighters and Bulma. It was funny, especially with Bulma and Piccolo.

I'm going to disagree with Momo now. o_o; Because you have to put into consideration everything Goku has and is currently going through in this story. >>; It's seriously like nothing he's endured in the series so his response to the events would obviously be different. And after what went down in this chapter... Who wouldn't take pull that card when the glass is right there in your hand! I'm sure Goku's con---....O.O Wait a sec. Goku's not only considered suicide in the show, he HAS commit it! Dude, Cell Saga; big KABOOM. >>; So yeah. When it's the last thing he can think of, he'll do it.

That's all I'm gonna say now. I have doodles to draw before they leave my head. D: I'm nervous they wont be right though.. I'll have to reread the scene again. As always, your writing is incredible. I love how you mention the little details .... x3

Lovely chapter! Possessive Vegeta is just too spiffy. Thanks for updating so quickly, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Great chapter again.

Are they really going try to get a human to impregnate Goku? Who will it be? Vegeta will use everything in his power to prevent it but will he regret not mating Goku if they do?

My hatred of Dr. Villa is growing extremely strong at this point. Your ability to immerse me in this story and draw such strong feelings is truely remarkable, I've actually been scowelling at the screen in some parts.

*sigh* I guess I'll have to wait until next Monday for an update, but wish I had a direct feed from your brain.
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Your writing skill is brilliant, the story is very interesting, except I have to say goku is a bit too OCC. I will never ever imagine in next million years that Goku will be so weak to commit suicide. Vegeta's care towards Goku is very touching. But Goku is just not Goku anymore. Don't get me wrong. I still enjoy the story, just read with detachment from Dragon Ball.

Nice chapter! And a lemon ... normally I'm all for lemons (lots and lots of lemons :-) ), but this one somehow lets you wish it wouldn't have happened. You're really not making it easy for our two beloved Saiyajins.
Well ... never give up hope ... so maybe everything will turn out fine in the end.
I don't know if you're more the Happy-End-Type or the Drama-Type ... I hope it will be happy, well at least for all the nice guys. Villa can suffer (and suffer) - hopefully Enma will give him a room to share with Freezer and Cell :-) I definitely will keep my fingers crossed for this. Yep, definitely.

Hm.. I must admit, this is the first chapter of this otherwise wholly enticing story that leaves me a little unsatisfied. The writing is good as per ususal, true, but I think the pacing picks up too fast in this one. I can understand that you were anxious to get to the lemon, but I thought that both Goku going into the drug-induced heat and Vegeta caving in happened too fast. But that only leaves me waiting even more anxiously for the next chapter!

I just... I just... I think you should know that I squealed. From the moment I read the word 'lemon' at the start of the chapter to every single line of the actual event...>>;; It was intense.

But wow. That was so dramatic and.. geez! What I love about this story is that it's always something new and unexpected! I mean, the way you played out the morning scene..I never would have guessed the breakfast was drugged!

Damn..>__>; Villa is such a pervert. BUT HE FAILED. He didn't anticipate that Vegeta would use his tail! >D And since the sex was blocked by the sheets, he'll never knoooooow!...........Okay, he will. When he finds out Goku isn't pregnant, he'll probably make him eat more food...>>;;; so then Goku and Vegeta'll just have to starve themselves....D: OH NOES. The rest of the Z-senshi better find them quick!

Oh and..needless to say, the lemon was hot. -:: Clears throat. ::- Very... very hot.

Nice explanation for why they can't use the dragonballs. It makes sense and fits into the logic of the series. Now their friends have to find them the old fashioned way but will they be in time, and what experiments will they have to endure before that?

So Vegeta wants to court Goku if/when they get free, hope your story covers that, that would be sweet.

Loved the lemon. I know I wanted tail-play but I wasn't expecting that kind of tail-play. Hot! Still it calmed his heat. Wonder if it fooled the doctors since they were covered up? Can't wait for the aftermath and Goku's reaction to Vegeta.
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How awful for those two, especially for poor Goku being drugged like that. They are both dealing with it better than I would if I were in their shoes. Vegeta is so thoughtful and loving towards Goku, and even though he feels guilty for what they just participated in, he did his best to maintain Goku's dignity, while doing it in such a way that makes it plain Goku is more important than himself. Thanks for the great chapter.