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...They want us to breed. Well isn't that a kick in the pants. Haven't they been through enough. I want Dr. Villa to die a slow and painful death...or at least, maim him a lot! Please?!

The flow of this chapter is just perfect. You are always so good at that but this time you're overdone yourself. Well, this time I cannot blame Dr.Villa. Honestly, who wouldn't want to kidnap these two sexy saiyans and lock them in a room full with cameras to spy how they make babies???? O.O
Excellent work, and just so you know, you're one of the few authors on this place that have them absolutely in character ^.~

glad to see that you updated. And that things are seemingly going better now for you. Nice Chappy! Looking foreward to reading more.

Hey!
It's good to read you again :-)
I don't know what problems you had but I hope everything turned out good (well? ... my English sucks) for you at last.
Although it was a bit short the chapter was really nice.
At the end of the last chapter I feared a bit that everything would go downhill now and develop into a drama/psycho thriller but it seems (for now?) that Goku manages quite well and with Vegeta there he will have at least someone to hold on to.

I'm curious if you will put some drama in it :-) You know, doctors torturing Goku so he can never trust again or something similar. Oh, I soooo hope Dr. Villa and all his minions will suffer, really really suffer.

Poor Goku *pets Goku's tail*
What was this with Vegeta being Goku's prince in shining armour? *grins*

Wow! This was a good chapter! Even after waiting for a couple months ^.^ I really hope you update again soon! I am also glad your life is straightening out again by what you said before ch 15. Good Work as alway!!

VEGEGOKU BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD Could this story get any better?! COULD IT?

I love the way you describe everything in this chapter--from the pain Goku felt as the bullets were removed, to the look on his face when Vegeta told him he could conceive! I missed this story so much! And I'm very glad you're feeling better! And Vegeta's such a smartie, coming up with that tracking chip plan! ^^ I hope Bulma finds them, though. >__>; Those doctors need to go away.

-:: Nuzzles. ::- Definitely the best part of my night.

*dies* omfg. ive been checking this every day to see if there was a new one. THANK YOU FOR THE NEW ONE. even though it was realy just shortish and made me want MORE!

Thanks for the update. I wasn't really surprised with the ending. I had a feeling that was the reason Goku reacted to Vegeta the way he did. I hope my last review wasn't forceful with the updating thing. People have lives outside of writing fan fiction, so not updating is a fact of life. I hope you take it as a compliment that so many people are enjoying this tale that they want to read more. You are a terrific storyteller. I hope Bulma comes to the rescue soon. I don't want Goku or Vegeta to have to suffer unknown acts of horror under the care of Dr. Villa. And this time, if they escape, I hope either Goku or Vegeta give Dr. Villa what he deserves.

Ah that's the reason for the leaky tail, very handy, can't wait to see it in action again.

Why do they want them to breed, do they want to experiment on the cubs too (shudders)? They're so sick, they remind me of old film footage of animal experiments in the fifties, no regard for life, driven by personal greed and glory, and the egotistical idea that humans have the right to do anything to other creatures as they think they are superior. If aliens ever did land you can bet there would still be those itching to experiment on them. Sorry, needed to vent that!

I look forward to the next chapter getting me all fired up again, or all gooey if there's tail-play.

Mwahahahaha, and another fic makes goku a bearer. **does a happy dance**
J-chan