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Gah! I think I may have found your deviantart-account.. damn, I haven't laughed that hard in a long time! Hey, I've been trying to find contact information on you but there seems to be none - if you'd maybe like to chat at some point, email me at darkserapha@gmx.de

I really do hope you plan on adding on soon! I think I came at the worst time. ch. 14 cliff hanger of death!! A great story so far! I hope you update soon!

LeSigh... I love your fics so much; I swear, they're seriously like a drug. >.< It's crack--CRACK I TELL YOU! *crazed eyes* Can I marry you and just bypass all the horrid waiting and need for more?????

.... *glances around innocently*

I love this fic--if you couldn't tell. >.< Like, wow. This is by far the best you've written. I WANT MORE! *begs-BEGS* Pllleeeeeaaasssseee!!!! *gives you big watery, innocent puppy-dog eyes* Mah, I can't wait to find out what happens next! It makes me giddy when I'm reading it and I'm put in such a good mood, I was so happy--for like 2 whole days after reading this (which is like, amazing) and all I could think about was the possabilities of what you would do next with the boys.

My god I love it. I love how you make Goku the "damsel in distress" and Vegeta is such an arrogant dominating sexy bastard. Gawd. *fans self* I love how make Vegeta. He's just such a sexy... BEAST! *grrrowl* Damn, he could dominate me any day. And I can't wait for when he does it to Goku... yummmm. I get all tingly just thinking about it. *grins*

Buuu, write more soon, please????? *begs some more*

Oh yeah, forgot to mention Bulma. OMG I love her!!! I always hate Bulma in all the other fics, but you make her so awsome in this. I love it! She's exactly like I'd picture her. She's even better than the real thing. (if you could considder that real???) I love how she's so devious and sneaky and motherly and kind and protective. She's nto a raving bitch like Chichi. >.< WEll, she is, but only during the right times and it fits! *claps*

I look everyday to make sure if you have or haven't updated this story. When you don't I get sad, and when you do I get sad when I reach the end of each chapter. you write so well and with great imagination to how it could have gone. Please keep up the great work.

okay...i will have to put it this way. despite how tired i am i could not stop reading this. I read all 14 chapters in one sitting and i am highly looking forward to your next update. I like your style of writing and the story itself to me seems like it really could happen. So good job so far and once again i look forward to your next update.

Uwaaah~ @_@ It's all getting so dangerous! O_o
Vegeta'll be able to save Goku though; he's got those super-strategic skills of his. :3

Ha, totally wonderful chapter! I wasn't expecting Vegeta to put on the ki restraints. It just shows how much he loves his dear Kakarotto. You have to update soon! You left it on such a cliffhanger and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Oh I can see Vegeta smirking as he let go off Goku after the kiss, watching as his Kakarot stayed there on the floor all dazed, as you put it “looking at the ceiling”, and then leaving the room all proud of himself. And how very well you described all the reaction from Goku after the kiss, his doubts, his confusion, his questioning , you have captured so well those first stages of an incipient relationship, the uncertainty, and then the kiss in the kitchen was so wow! It’s a pity though that Bulma’s intromission got Goku so stressed, whenever they make advances in the right direction to building a solid affective relation a new obstacle is thrown in their way.
And now an unexpected and incredibly interesting twist, I’m excited with this new turn of events, more suspense, more drama, what will those evil scientists do now with both Saiyans? (Maybe I’m lucky enough and they first decide to study the sexual behavior and reproductive habits of Saiyans Bwahahaha! ) Now seriously, this story is getting better and better. Thanks for such fantastic Christmas present! (Now I should start reviewing “Try again“, maybe that way I’d get to coax you to update it, still my favorite, I can’t help it but a preggie/mommy Goku is impossible to beat Lmao! )

I have to admit I've mostly been reading this because it's the only thing regulary updated, so I don't expect much. But still. Chapter 14 fails miserably. The characters are already OOC enough. I highly doubt Vegeta would agree to any such terms, and it's not like gathering dragonballs or other methods are that hard.

Very pathetic development... *sigh*