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T_T WTF?! How could you?! How dare you O_o?!
I hope you start a new chapter soon ;_; I expect you writing like you have never befor XD. Rescue our precious Goku and Vegeta... I don't want to know bout the new study the docotr is planing... it frightens me >.<
Just let them have pure sex (*COUGH*) let them be happy T_T *snif*

Excuse my poor english... I'll try my best ^0^V. I'm from Austria and loooooove your fanfic *_*. Hope it will soon continue *beg* *littlepuppyeyes*.

rei~

Interesting turn of events. I believe that out of all of your fanfictions I'm enjoying this the most. Though, my only qualm is that Kakarott is little more uke than I would have liked, we are all entitled to our preferences. It is easy to overlook this since the story is believeable and after what Kakarott has been through, it's easy to see how his personality may developed this way.

I like that Vegeta chose the option of going peacefully, ever the brilliant tactition. It isn't often that he's given to moments of chivalry but from his standpoint I can understand how he would want to share the experience with Kakarott. As long as the younger saiyan is within his sight he can begin plotting and planning his next move, working from the inside out on how to defeat this band of evil scientists.

Since Vegeta has been in worse scrapes than this, I trust that he has a plan in mind though he is prone to biting off more than he can chew. Being that he has no idea what the human race is truly capable of, he may have underestimated them.

I can only pray that Kakarott and Vegeta can endure this latest turn of event and continue to bring their budding 'relationship' into fruition.

I eagerly await the next installment.

On another note, In many ways this story reminds of my old fanfiction "Living A Lie" since I used the whole 'saiyan experiment' idea as well. If I had kept at it, I may have gone down a similar road that you are. Now that I am aware that your story exists I can only hope that I can alter Living A Lie enough so that it remains an original on its own. I almost want to rewrite the whole damn thing because I started writing it something like 6 years ago and it's STILL incomplete (and my writing style has changed dramatically over time). Alas, it's been so many years and my attention is not as focused on it as it should be. Perhaps reading "In Your Dreams" will inspire me to continue.

Oh and forget what that idiot Chloe said in his/her comment. Some people can be so shallow and opinionated. Why read something when all you have to say is something negative about it? I 'ought to stab him/her in the fucking eyes.

nice job! This chapter has defiantly hightened both the drama and suspense factors. thank you for updating this story so quickly!!!!!!!! till next time....

OMG! I will hunt him down and kill him! Shot guns arn't ment to hurt Kakarott they're ment to hunt zombies.
J-chan

Brillient chapter, I'm almost speechless. They've got Goku and Vegeta, oh no! What devious experiments have they planned for them? They were getting so close, and now they are forced together in unwelcome circumstances.

How am I going to sleep now until you update?

Thanks though for updating over Xmas, a merry one to you too.
xxx

The hickey thing of chapter 12 was priceless, everything, from the sucking , to Goku's shyness to Trunks sudden interest to spend time with Goku and Vegeta jealousy. And the fall was so masterfully described and so it was Goku's and Vegeta's reaction after it! Aghh I felt so frustrated after reading chapter 12, how could Vegeta screw it all like that, he was doing it so well until that, but then the last part of chapter 13 was so fricking incredible; Goku coming to Vegeta's bed, the pillow battle and the kiss; it's interesting to see such playful side of Vegeta and that only Goku is able to put him in such mood, I only hope Vegeta won't do any other stupid thing like the falling thing. I'm looking forward to see how things progress aftter the kiss specially how Goku will be affected by it and his attitude and demeanor around Vegeta now that he knows how the prince feels BTW, merry Christmas!

congrats on your state board

Good job, Vegeta :-)
Finally he's doing something right ^^
Oh, and yes, definitely a great progress, a wonderful turn of events, indeed.
I'm glad Goku liked the kiss, somehow I feared he would panic and things would be worse than before.
You know, maybe traumatic events due to Dr. Dumbass or similar ... but luckily everything went fine and now ...
.... now the fun can begin (hopefully) ... if there's not a mayor drawback because of another Vegeta-induced incident ^^

PS: forgive me my grammar mistakes :-)

so good! must have more! vegeta is was being soo patient. its good that he made a small step forward.