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FINALLY!!!

Yeah, Goku can fly and use ki again. I was worried he wasn't making much progress but it seems revenge on Vegeta was just the incentive he needed. Loved that. The pillow fight was cute and the kiss even better, glad Vegeta's still taking it slowly, even though patience is not his strong point.
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I got to hand it to Vegeta, He has learned to not be so aggressive for romance sake. Bravo my Prince!

Thanks for updating again so soon. Cosmo, that's such a cute name! Well, I hope that he continuess to bring you joy and happiness (I know that my kitten who's currently purring on my lap as I'm typing thsi and swiping at my hands is). Till next time.,....

Yes, Vegeta definitely needs to work on the wooing skills. Nice chapter.

I always reading about the first kiss. It's probably a little awkward for Goku, being kissed like that by his former rival, but at the same time, it's always nice to realize that you are loved. Love this story and I'm looking forward to the next update.

O_o ya Vegeta needs a smack in the head for that.
J-chan

I'll second what Simone said. What Are You Doing Vegeta!!! That's no way to court Goku. He'll have to do some major sucking up to get back in his good books now, after doing so well with his sneaky hickey.

Try tiring your puppy out and write when he sleeps. My brother's puppy gets tired quickly if you give him the round around. Then we get an hour of peace.

Loving your work.
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Nooo .... *wipes tears* ... *sniff* ... just how could you do that?
Poor Goku baby having such a shock and everything... bad Vegeta *slaps Vegeta over the head*
What are you doing, boy!! You're never going to win Goku like that!
You should be his prince in shining armour, not ... that! Just HOW COULD YOU?!!
Now go and apologize!! No, don't you look at me like that. It's not working. Go and apologize RIGHT AWAY!!
You know it might not be too late ... yet. But it'll need a lot of courting ... you know, flowers, chocolate, a nice meal and nice music ... campfire in the wild ... you know, the full program.

Now go and HIT IT UP! Let us be proud of you!! You can do it, Vegeta!


Well .... I hope this little speech helped a bit ... you know ... men!!! They just seem to miss an important gene, or chromosome or something ...

Greatchapter plaese keep it up it is helping me through midterms.