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This story is so frickin cute and well-written, it makes me all giddy and mushy each time I see it updated. Congratulations on a really well written plot (I love me some angsty Goku and possessive Vegeta in protector-mode). Can't wait for the next update!

You've updated!! You really made my weekend ^^
The last scene in Veggie's bedroom was just sooooo sweet.
I hope 'something' will happen soon ... you know ... ^^ but I think it's just too early for Goku.
But maybe a kiss would be OK ... please? ... pretty please? ^^

Hope you'll update soon. And have fun with your new puppy ^^ give him a hug from me.

Another excellent installment. I like the way you constructed the whole chapter. And Goku is not only looking but also acting like a confused and unstable adolescent, which makes sense after the ordeal he went through on that lab, that makes all more interesting. He needs a guiding hand ;)

(You’re so devious, you gave him strange lumps as well lol ) So he knows what those are and what for and I was reading the whole thing biting at my nails thinking you were gonna explain all about that, but once again you left us with the suspense. Lol And Vegeta wanted to play with that, pervert prince, well whatever the mystery gets to be, this ’ability’ of Goku will be rather ’useful’ (Man, all the money they will save, no need to spend so many in lube lmao )

Oh the family, always so inopportune, neh? The reaction of Goku’s son was totally expected, they will always love him unconditionally no matter what and never keep grudges against him. The Pan thing was priceless, I never liked her (But I don’t like most of the female characters of dragonball because they are plainly annoying which ruins whatever good quality they might have ) but you turned her into someone with a rather appealing and interesting personality (In spite the girly look lol ) It’s funny, anyway, to see a clone of Chichi acting so understanding but good that you keep her determination intact.

What I like the most about the ’awkward’ reunion was the interaction between Vegeta and Trunks, Vegeta throwing a lamp to his son was priceless. I particularly would like it if you would exploit that topic in next chapters. Lol just a suggestion.

But the best apart from the Vegeta/Goku on the couch before the interruption, was the end. Lol Goku will always be the naïve one, thinking he could sneak so inconspicuously on Vegeta, he’s so cute when he’s like that. Vegeta, on the other hand, is acting very wisely, giving Goku his space and time and not rushing things. Can’t wait for the next one :D

I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story, but I can show you by reviewing everytime I read it. It is a great story and very original story line with Goku not being able to speak.

What a great story so far! I didn't like GT either, but I like your take on things. Looking forward to reading more.

The length was just fine. I like stories that have meat to their chapters, and this story is proving to be interesting and exciting at the same time. I can't wait to find out what happens now that Vegeta and Goku have met again. I also feel really bad for Goku, losing his voice and most of is ki. However, I am enjoying your portrayal of Goku and how he ended up in such a predicament in the first place.

I think shopping with Bulma would tire anybody out, not just a weak Saiya-jin. It was a cute and funny chapter, especially Goku and Yamcha and their pillows. I wonder how they plan on using them.

Vegeta is just so...cute in this story, for lack of a better description. I mean, he really isn't cute, but he's so nice to Goku. You have also kept him in character as well, and as for his potty mouth, that's how I always think of Vegeta talking. It is a little bit freakish to think of Yamcha having thoughts about Goku, but then again, he used to have that affliction of being afraid of girls.

That was such a sweet end to the chapter, I can really picture Goku's face when he thinks he got away with it (but the Prince sees all). Looking forward to them waking up. Will Goku get away before Vegeta awakes?

I prefer Pan as a tomboy but it will be interesting to see what you do with her now she's not. Trunks seems to know something is (potentially) going on, which is intriguing too.

I'm also a sucker for fur, cats, dogs, small rodents. Maybe that's why I like Saiyan tails so much!
xxx

The ending of chapter 11 was so sweet, Vegeta waiting for Goku to come an snuggle up with him. Is there a way to put a story on an alert list on this website? Because if there is, I haven't figured it out, and I'd like to know when you are updating. It's really good and I'm hooked. It's just such a sweet story, even though poor Goku has had to suffer. Looking forward to reading more of it.