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Well, here´s my comment to your Story - i like it! Oh, what am I saying, I love it!
It´s all written so interesting, i like the storyline, i love how you discribe it all.
And its really about time that Kakarotto makes his way to the Prince^^
Oh, and gomen for my bad english, i´m german, and i hope you could understand though...

Heehee, Goku is so cute when he thinks hes being sneaky. I remember what it was like having to share a computer with one's parents. Plus that was back when we had just a dial-up line as well. Horrible. Then I got my own PC and we upgraded to DSL, so now I'm much happier. Hope to read your next chapter soon.

Excellent job on this chapter, I love the gradual progression of the romance in particular; You've made it slowly come together at a steady and reasonable pace. For this I thank you, I look forward to your next post.

You bet ya!! I'd definatly watch the show again if it were made for adults, and Goku and Vegeta were the pair in luv.

Can't wait to find out what will happen next.
Keep writing!

i freakin love this story. I WANT MORE. damn you and your good stories!

Awww Goku smells like Vegeta's favorite food, that was so sweet. Great chapter. Thought they were going to do it this time but you snatched it away at the end, you tease!

Glad your scan results were ok.
xxx

CHAPTER EIGHT:

(Aghhh sorry for skipping so many reviews, my internet keeps on being a pain in the ass)

Yeah, Vegeta had the guts to admit to himself that he wants Goku. That’s Vegeta, facing and admitting the naked truth without qualms.

I liked all the insight you gave on this chapter about Goku’s lack of real affection, I’m thrilled with the idea that he will get to experience what love really means for the first time with the prince. And it was very touching all the scene of Goku’s nightmare, how Vegeta saw some of the torments Goku had experienced for years, that would help him to understand better the other man and strengthen their future relationship; Goku’s panic at what Vegeta could have witnessed (That has me totally intrigued O.o what kind of things that evil Doctor did to poor Goku?? ), that uncharacteristic tenderness of Vegeta and of course the way Goku bribed Vegeta into stay and keeping on comforting him with his caresses, lovely.

Hehe, well about the Trunks thing I just thought it could be funny to see father and son as rivals fighting over Goku, it would be entertaining to see Vegeta looking for advice to properly court Goku, and it would be also interesting to see Goku suddenly being the object of romantic interest of two men when he never before in his life had received such attention, I would like to see his reaction, maybe he would be overwhelmed and confused and incapable to choose, at least in the beginning, especially if he isn’t conscious that one of his suitors are just lusting for him while the other feels true love. Lol , just fantasies of mine, you can just ignore them.


CHAPTER NINE:

Oh poor Goku, it seems that still he must go through a lot of shit. Chichi was so unfair, after all she has already move on and has the kind of husband he always wanted, she had no right to be so mean. But at least it serves for Goku to start realizing some things about himself, his terror to disappoint his prince . And that training session only got things worse, poor Goku. Those misunderstandings between the two saiyans are heartbreaking. You’re a master when it comes to create tension and drama , but you will have to make it up great time lol The guys deserve a very generous reward for everything you are doing with them :P



CHAPTER TEN:

Impressive! You’ve outdone yourself. This was so intense, and it was only a hug. My blood pressure right now is over superhuman levels. I’m just licking my lips waiting for the oncoming lemons (Do take note that I made use of the plural, please XD )

Poor Goku, though. Finally he got to savor the delight of being with another man in an intimate way just to start feeling guilty and dirty. Poor, poor thing. I hope he gets over all those issues soon. Vegeta should take notice that they have a serious problem of communication that goes beyond Goku’s incapacity of speaking and he should work on that too (But without forgetting the ‘so hot comforting moments’ :D) It’s heart-wrenching to see all the misunderstandings between them, maybe Vegeta gets to figure out that he probably should confess openly his feelings for Goku but I understand his dilemma that Goku, in his delicate state of mind would freak out or something, and besides gentleness isn’t Vegeta’s forte, I have to give him credit though for his efforts to try to help Goku and how he‘s controlling his own urges in favor to make things better for the other saiyan.
And now another mystery, with this thing of the lubrication, lol I would like to have the video tapes of all that happened during all those years in Villa’s lab I need to knowit, desperately, suspense is killing me lol I’m a fan of X-files so your story gets me totally hook lmao

BTW, great to know that everything is OK with you ahaha but you’re a perfect specimen for Dr. Villa, don’t let him know you have strange things living within you and take care with those UIL (Unidentified inner lumps) lmao who knows if those are some kind of extraterrestrial form of life that has taken your body for hostage. Just in case, don’t feed them after midnight, don’t take them for a walk under the full moon and don’t ever let them watch ’Mars attacks’, we don’t need to give them ideas….OMG we’re doomed lol Sorry I’m again babbling too much nonsense

Wow! I just read the ten chappies all at once and absolutely loved them. The whole jealousy thing with Yamcha was a riot and the hug was beautiful. You are most definitely correct, I would have no qualms whatsoever, watching them two feel each other up for 7 episodes. Amazing. Please write more soon.

Best.
Hug.
Ever.