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man I never win at those games>.<
J-chan

Get him Vegeta!!! This is soo good!

Wow, two whole chapters since I last visited ... honestly, just HOW do you do that? ^^
But who am I to complain *g* ... they were just great.
Oh, and how I love jealous Vegeta ... Yamcha better takes his hands off Goku ^^

It's getting hot ^^ Did I mention that I love you? Well, I do *g*

Oh, and how I'm looking forward to the point, when Vegeta will take Goku to Dende.
First because of the healing and all, but second, ooohhhhhhh, I guess Vegeta has to carry Goku *ahem* ... *grins like a maniac* ... well, ermmmm, yes. ^^

Vegeta's just sooo cool as Goku's prince in shining armour. The role really suits him. 'Take your hands off him if you want to keep them.' ... you're just the best *smiles*

Awe, are you okay?! What is the catscan for? :<

This chapter was really cute. And informative. It really developed the plot well but MY GOSH you are really making me lose it about this secret sexual issue Goku has! I mean, you stopped RIGHT THERE!

That image of Vegeta snapping out of his trance to find Goku staring right at him sort of creped me out. XD I'd be startled to see that. And I laughed when Vegeta just..started petting Goku. It's such a weird, gentle thing for him to do. XD

Your story about how Goku doesn't like contact is something else I enjoyed. I love how you make so many references from Dragonball/Z in this. :D

I hope you don't feel too sick. D: I will be patient for the next update.

watch out dont let them make you guzzle down acid....maybe your story is based on fact...O.O NOOOOOOOO BEWARE THE SCIENTISTS!!!!! RUN! RUN NOW!

Bulma is so wise. Good luck with your scan!!

Haha, poor Yamcha! I may not be his greatest fan in the world, but even he deserves better then being set up by Bulma like that. She should have let him in on the plan. Can't wait to see what perverted fantasy Vegeta's mind comes up with while he's dreaming.

Oh Vegeta is sooo jealous that Yamcha is with his Kakarrot (though thankfully not carnally yet), but would Yamcha swing for Goku? I hope not.
I love a possessive Vegeta that is almost clueless to his own desires.

Poor silent Goku again, but it was so sweet that Vegeta tried to help.

This is such a wonderful story, eagerly awaiting more.

So Vegeta really does have the hots for Goku, but what does Goku think?
You're right, things are hotting up and I can't wait, though you update so often I think I love you.

Now where can I sign up to learn that Crazy Monkey Style fighting?

I loves your story! please continue!