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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WTF!! sorry for the language but whats with the major cliff hanger!? Grr. I can't wait for more i love this story.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That had better not have ACTUALLY been a dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! Lauryn! ....I'll tell you right now i have no flippin clue what you got planned but you just brought me to tears!
I was all "aww this is so sweet and i can see it..and they stay in character" ..or well yeah. like not when i write XD...
then that...last line! “No, Vegeta. You’re not going blind. .....You’re waking up.” i actually gasped and then started crying! i just started thinking of all the possible scenarios you could make..and.. OMG I ALMOST DONT WANT TO KNOW!
*takes a breath, then and other and an other, wiping eyes* OK! im ok...O.O YOU ARE LEAVING YOUR FANS WITH THIS CLIFFY HANGER AND ..OMG! LAURYN!!!!!!!!!!
as much as i dont want to find out what evilness you have in store i must know..so you take the vaca..and then come back..and write full force! understood?!
I THINK I STOPPED MAKING SENSE! NOT THE POINT!!! omg! *hyperventilates*
I was all "aww this is so sweet and i can see it..and they stay in character" ..or well yeah. like not when i write XD...
then that...last line! “No, Vegeta. You’re not going blind. .....You’re waking up.” i actually gasped and then started crying! i just started thinking of all the possible scenarios you could make..and.. OMG I ALMOST DONT WANT TO KNOW!
*takes a breath, then and other and an other, wiping eyes* OK! im ok...O.O YOU ARE LEAVING YOUR FANS WITH THIS CLIFFY HANGER AND ..OMG! LAURYN!!!!!!!!!!
as much as i dont want to find out what evilness you have in store i must know..so you take the vaca..and then come back..and write full force! understood?!
I THINK I STOPPED MAKING SENSE! NOT THE POINT!!! omg! *hyperventilates*
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're so mean
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've got to say. I really have enjoyed this story. Thanks for updating and not giving up on it!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yea a new chapter! Oh, I hope this hasn't all been Vegeta's dream and he's really not with Goku....I'll be soooo sad :( Update soon please...(begins to freak out) the cliff hanger is killing me! I need to know what happens next!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You? Lauryn? ROURINU? LAURYN M. CRIMSONTIDE FIREFLY ROURINU HAD -TROUBLE- WRITING VEGEGOKU?
-:: Thwaps you upside the head. ::- You and I need to go off and draw some canon shounen ai for a while, my dear. I think RP is getting too thick in your head. We should devote a whole month to just Canon DBZ! I've been meaning to suggest it for a while. I, myself, feel the urge to reopen my clubs and go back to drawing contest entries of sheer sexy eye candy. It's normal, I fall into it alllll the time. And it's probably what I'll do after I finish these IDs. x_x;
-:: SWOONS over this chapter. ::- This was so hot, by the way. *-* I think I have to read it again. I've missed reading your style. Your Vegeta - you know I love your Vegeta. And your attention to detail always gets me. AND YOUR GOKU IS JUST THE CUTEST WIDDLE SWEETIE PIE EVER. ;.;
I loved the part where he swung Goku over his shoulder. XDD Goku's classic "I'm not a girl!" got cut off.
And when Vegeta was like "That must have been the best fuck of my life, because I'm clearly going blind." I cracked up so hard! XDD Maybe it's my immaturity but I really couldn't catch my breath.
.....................but I swear.
That last line.
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IF YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY. THAT THIS WHOLE ENTIRE STORY HAS BEEN A DREAM.........O.O
I mean, yeah, it's called In Your Dreams BUT BUT BUT!!! THEY JUST GOT TO THE HAPPY PART!!!!! D: You wouldn't be THAT cruel, would you!!? Poor Vegeta. ...Poor....p- WHERE WOULD GOKU BE IF THIS WAS JUST A DREAM? O_O DON'T MAKE OUR GOKU DISAPPEAR!! >< NOOO! Now I'm all scared and paranoid and and and and -:: Clutches her many Goku plushies for security. ::-
Update soon. Please.....PLEASE!
-:: Thwaps you upside the head. ::- You and I need to go off and draw some canon shounen ai for a while, my dear. I think RP is getting too thick in your head. We should devote a whole month to just Canon DBZ! I've been meaning to suggest it for a while. I, myself, feel the urge to reopen my clubs and go back to drawing contest entries of sheer sexy eye candy. It's normal, I fall into it alllll the time. And it's probably what I'll do after I finish these IDs. x_x;
-:: SWOONS over this chapter. ::- This was so hot, by the way. *-* I think I have to read it again. I've missed reading your style. Your Vegeta - you know I love your Vegeta. And your attention to detail always gets me. AND YOUR GOKU IS JUST THE CUTEST WIDDLE SWEETIE PIE EVER. ;.;
I loved the part where he swung Goku over his shoulder. XDD Goku's classic "I'm not a girl!" got cut off.
And when Vegeta was like "That must have been the best fuck of my life, because I'm clearly going blind." I cracked up so hard! XDD Maybe it's my immaturity but I really couldn't catch my breath.
.....................but I swear.
That last line.
...........
IF YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY. THAT THIS WHOLE ENTIRE STORY HAS BEEN A DREAM.........O.O
I mean, yeah, it's called In Your Dreams BUT BUT BUT!!! THEY JUST GOT TO THE HAPPY PART!!!!! D: You wouldn't be THAT cruel, would you!!? Poor Vegeta. ...Poor....p- WHERE WOULD GOKU BE IF THIS WAS JUST A DREAM? O_O DON'T MAKE OUR GOKU DISAPPEAR!! >< NOOO! Now I'm all scared and paranoid and and and and -:: Clutches her many Goku plushies for security. ::-
Update soon. Please.....PLEASE!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh whats happening to goku? Was it all just a dream? Cant wait til the next and final chapter begins.
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Simply, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! MORE MORE MORE
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! it has so much details and i love Momoku she sounds so cute. *falls over* sorry, anyways i love this story.