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Aww! I love the whole "Vegeta winning prizes for Goku" thing! :D What a great way to end the date--tossing Yamcha aside like that! Another great chapter! x3 I'm a very happy girl.

Thank you for updating so soon. I was having a kinda crappy day w/ an extra heaping of work, and this helped cheer me up. Thanks again!

Humph, I get distracted just for one day and see what happens, you have two new chapters up. O.o Sorry for skipping one review, blame my exams, they are looming, OMFG so near, just to kick my ass, bleh I just stole a little while from my studying time only because of your wonderful story XD

First, thanks for letting us know that Goku’s lowers are intact, it’s quite the relief ^.^ So his girlie voice is just because he hasn’t changed voice yet, poor baby, he’s too young lol (well, I’m not that familiar with his squeaking voice, I never heard the Japanese dub and though I’ve heard a little of the USA dub, here in my country the VA who plays Goku-well, actually there were 3 different VA for Goku along the whole DBZ series- ^^;; but all of them gave him a ‘manly’ voice, ironically here Vegeta has a much softer voice than the American Vegeta, bleh Ok sorry for so much digressing ^^;; )

Oh the drama of the first half of chapter 6!! I like how you manage to include drama and tension along with humorous scenes through the whole story, you make it so believable, kudos! It was heart-wrenching to see how Goku lost his voice again, no wonder he felt so bad, it’s rare though to see him so defeated, but totally understandable, after all he’s been through. And it was wonderful to see how Vegeta cares for his Kakarot, haha that was so predictable, to go to vent his anger by trying to kick Dende’s ass, that was absolutely Vegeta.

Aghhh Yamcha, I knew he was going to try to get in the way. Lol you captured so perfectly how pathetic he is, at his old age and still with those airs of Playboy with the sunglasses and such :P He deserved the ’your-hot-son’ thing *snickers* Oh How I wish that Vegeta would have been there to hear it, that would have been just perfect, or better maybe Goku can tell him later and have a good laugh of it ;)

Perfect end to the chapter: Vegeta’s jealousy!! XDDDD

Now, to chapter seven: OMG, it’s official, I’m totally in love with chapter seven!!!

Mostly because the spying thing and Vegeta‘s jealousy, lol It’s delicious, for once to see Vegeta chasing and lusting after Goku (I just hate it when people have Goku drooling after Vegeta while the prince remains oblivious, but people keep on doing that, when it’s just natural the other way around, Goku is the object of desire of everyone, period! )

Everything in that chapter was perfect; Vegeta figuring out the real motives of his interest for Goku, his jealousy, his resolve to stalk the ’couple’ , Yamcha’s annoyance Hehe finally Vegeta and Goku had their first date, an unconventional and unexpected one, but thei fist date after all, even if it was a threesome lmao
Yamcha isn’t a rival though I love his embarrassment when he had to admit he was incapable to get the stuffed animal for Goku lol how low he had fallen :D I wonder how it would be to have a more remarkable ival, like Trunks, for instance: Vegeta would have a hard time to get his Goku, it would be rather entertaining (Though I just like the VegetaxGoku pairing, from time to time I like to entertain the thought of a perverted Trunks chasing after Goku, to Vegeta’s dismay but without any success of course, lol. *slaps myself* sorry, I’m digressing again ^^;; )

It was perfect to see Vegeta boasting and letting flare his ego. But even better the ice-cream thing, oh my the Goku’s swirling-tongue…I bet Vegeta will have later wet dreams about it :D And his arousal just because Goku touched his thighs lol
Another thing was the way Vegeta just packed all Goku’s stuff in his car, just like saying: I’m the alpha here, the only and rightful owner of Kakarot so get your useless ass out of here, Yamcha lol

Ohhh When you mentioned about Vegeta’s tail fluffing because Goku’s actions, I was thinking about the sudden attraction of Goku for fluffy soft things and I just could but entertain the thought of Goku suddenly getting addicted to touch Vegeta’s tail , I bet Vegeta wouldn’t mind, neh? ^_~

Marvelous work , as usual, can’t wait for more!!

I love it when Yamcha's Bi-ness shows up! Will there be a battle for Goku's affections? I'm glad you posted what you could, cause it sure as heck made my day! Hope to see more of this great stuff soon.

LMAO-OMFG!

~Falls over laughing... Dies!~

Can't Breathe!

~Gasp!~

Gah!

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Oh shit!

"Kakarotto, wait!!"
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Thankyou!

Thats was the cure for a very bad few months!

Thankyou!!

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That's just great!! You restored Goku's voice *dances around happily*

And jealous Vegeta was just soooooo cute! All protective *g* 'Don't touch his tail!' ... oh, I just loved it.
I want mooooore, mooooooooore .... I think I'm getting addicted to this story.
You really do a great job ... I don't know how you do it, but it's just great how often you have a new chapter ready (by the way I didn't think this one was short ^^).

Hoping you update soon ^^ *cheers on your muses hoping to get a lemon soon*

Hehe the bored Vegeta is a fabulous idea.. What a better remedy against boredom than a pet? It seems that Vegeta got one for himself ;) though his new pet doesn’t seem easy to tame, he will have to work hard…this is so promising!!
And even better: A jealous Vegeta. I love it when he’s all over-possessive and over-protective with his Kakarot :D
Yes, Vegeta should go and take what he wants…he just has to figure out what he wants, neh? Though I’m pretty sure that he’s starting to get the hints. I love how you’re giving a glimpse of what’s going on with Vegeta, I would like to see also what’s inside Goku, how he’s feeling about Vegeta, uggh I’m not sure if you know what I mean, because I am not able to explain it better. ^^;;

Goku is so determined and eager to recover his energy and strength, so typical of him! And now that the prince has volunteered (or rather, imposed himself ) to train him it’s going to be really entertaining.

Ok now I’m worried and stressed, that thing of Goku’s fear to show his privates along with Vegeta’s comment that he sounds like a girl O.o..he could not possibly have been castrated D: an eunuch Goku is sooo sad, please, tell me his jewels have not been severed *crawls toward Goku and makes the pat-pat to check if everything down there is ok…Vegeta pops out of nowhere, growling like a beast and ready to throw his final flash attack… Ahhhh …I better run ^^, … O.o damn, I won’t get any sleep until you clarify that.

I simply adore that little exchange between them… “I am going to tell Bulma that you’re picking on me” That was priceless, I did not know that Goku could be so devious, XD (Goku recovering his voice was totally unexpected, but the thing of having Dende augmenting the power of the senzu bean was really clever. I love all your ideas.

(Thanks for reviewing my fic, still thinking that your nice compliments were totally undeserved but incredibly motivating so I really appreciate it ^__^ )

You took it away. You took it away, only after calling him Bura. :< I think I just lost my pupp-- I don't like dogs. So we're changing it to birdie! Oh god. I'll cry.

Stupid Dende. Making things complicated. ..I'm surprised Piccolo didn't follow Vegeta back to see Goku. He's usually quite protective of Goku and Gohan, himself.

Goku has a new sexy outfit. You know I'm going to draw it. XD! He's like a little fashion show. I enjoyed the car scene. It was so funny and cute when Goku was called Yamcha's son. And then when Goku grabbed the wheel from Yamcha and later whacked him upside the head..his little fits are adorable!

Vegeta better kill Yamcha soon, though. I don't want to draw that creepy old man again. ....... >>;;; Get Broly in here, lol. XD Just kidding~~ ... I typed kissing at first.

Thank you for clarifying that Goku has not been mutilated below the waist line. XD I can rest easy now. Haha

Oh, and by the way, I'm proud of myself. :D My pictures have been making people read your story and they love it as much as I do! ^^ You deserve it soo much!

Next chapter, please! X3

Thanks for updating so fast. Poor Vegeta. (Can you tell who my favorite character is?) He's just trying to help and keeps getting snubbed. You're making me crazy but it's fun.

OMG!!! This is sooo entertaining! I am getting a real kick out of how Bulma is making Vegeta jealous.