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Wow. Cool. I love when Vegeta's the hero. It's so rare. Thanks for this chapter. Can't wait for the next!

Ooo, a new story! :D Very nicely written. And the plot is fantastic!

Poor Goku. :< I hope Bulma can help him feel better and get him back home soon.

Can't wait for the next update! ^^

Good start!
Poor Goku! I really hope Bulma can help him and take him home.
Oh, hopefully Goku is not too traumatized (is this a word? - sorry, no native speaker :-) and Vegeta is able to help him, cuddle him and make him feel better.
Don't let him suffer too long, it's just so sad *sniffs* ... poor Goku :-(

A new story from you, I’m thrilled :D The plot seems really interesting. I’ve noticed that it has become a constant in your fics, at least in most of them, to have Goku as the poor ‘damsel’ in distress (I only forgive your sadist urges to torture him because you’re a terrific writer, lmao just kidding) and Vegeta as his knight in bright armor XD I must say I love it, I’ve always thought that Vegeta’s dream was to become Goku’s savior. It is sorta tender and sweet to see the cranky prince as the protector of the Earth’s savior , as if nobody else but him would care about Goku (sorry for the sentimental mood lol but it’s so difficult to find a good story portraying them exactly the way I’ve always imagined them ^.^ ) Don’t forget “Try again” please. I know I suck at reviewing, but it’s very difficult to me to find time to read anyway I’m still re-reading your other fics, not only because I enjoy them so much, but also because I want to learn from you, you’re first class. Now you only have to tell me how to do it to give the perfect amount of details to make the story so fluent at the same time that interesting, because I get so lost into details, I just don’t know how to do it.
Thanks for another good reading :D.

Oooo, write more, write more!!!! Pretty, pretty please!!! This is gonna be good. Bad, bad scientist. They aren't going to let Bulma go after this, since she knows who their "subject" is. Can't wait to see Vegeta go hunting!!!

so a fangirl, man I dread to see what happens when the scientist relieze she knows him....unless they already do....RUN BULMA RUN AND GET THE PRINCE!
J-chan