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for In Your Dreams

by CrimsonTide

person 66Hiei08
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've hung on every chapter of this story. Excellent job!!!
person Anomlov
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!!! Another chapter! It was sooo cute. I love Goku "HOLD MY BABY" >D Priceless. I can't wait to read this next couple of chapters. This is an awsome fan fiction...I can't believe it's almost finished. Awesome job, you are a very talented writer!
person Lepa2793
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!
Absolutely lovely!
You have managed to put together a fab chappy again!!! <3<3<3
person Chuquita
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The CAKE. X3
Such a sweet chapter.
I really enjoyed both Goku and Vegeta's reactions to said cake. XD

I imagine Goku wanted someone to look over Momoku for the night so that he could have his honeymoon? X3


Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is BRILLIANT!! I had a one many years ago that started with Goku being in a lab and having his growth stunted like that, but it wouldn't have been written nearly as well. I demand to read more, MORE!! update soon plz ^^
person TristaML
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Adorable marriage
person Anomlov
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Another update! I'm so glad that Goku finally has his parental insticts kicking in...I love that Vegeta was understanding enough to have gotten Piccolo to have a small ceremony. I can't wait to read about the reception ang Goku meeting Victor after his small blow-up. I hope he forgives goku :) Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
person Chuquita
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waai~! That was so sweet. X3 Piccolo just makes me grin. X3 And Cheshire-Cat-smile Vegeta was priceless. :D I really like that it was out in the forest afterall. And Goku using his tail to keep Momoku entertained was cute. X3
person Madwren
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWW! Great chapter love the story! Keep up the amazing work! :D
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A little over protective there eh Goku? And of course Vegeta just smirks ^_^ K

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