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Love it! L-O-V-E IT!
That last bit there with Victor, Momoku and Goku, so funny! <3

Waah! It ate my review! @_@
*Tries again*

Anyways! I loved Vegeta in this chapter. "Surprise her." XD He was excellent throughout it, especially at the end where he's all smirking.

Poor Goku. The pressure's getting to him. Its making him paranoid. TT_TT

I can't wait to see how the wedding itself plays out.

I missed this story! Thank you for the update.

OMG another awsome chapter! Yea for Goku his maternal/paternal @___@...ummmm...well his instincts for his daughter have come through! I hope you update soon...I'm dying to to see what happens next....will the wedding occur? Will Victor forgive Goku for his freakout? Will Geta follow Goku and calm him down? Tune in next to find out from In Your Dreams......(liitle pout and giant eyes) pretty please update soon

Bulma chasing down Goku was hysterical!!! And I'm glad he's getting more comfortable w/ their daughter! I think he'll end up being a terrific dad to her! Better than Vegeta! Lol!

I am happy to see that u were able to finally update! Yay! I went to the outfit-and not to be mean, but it is extrememly girly-it looks like something a sailor moon chick would wear. Is everyone forgetting that Goku is a MAN! Why would he wear a girl's outfit? I really like ur story and am not trying to be mean, but c'mon-Goku is a guy and I really think that Vegeta likes him because he is so strong and so manly. ANyway-the wedding should be fun and I'm glad that Goku gets to spend some time w/ his daughter now and that Vegeta has stopped being such an a**. !! Hopefully, their relationship will continue happily and a little more equally-Vegeta treats Goku like a *itch sometimes-but then again-that is the Vegeta we know and love!!! Goku needs to stick up for himself and just not tolerate it!!! ANd maybe-they can have another baby in the future? One they both want! A little sis or bro (sis is better!!!) !!! Anyway-great job again and hope u update soon! ^_^

Wai~! I missed this story. X3
Vegeta's so evil. :3 I do like how he gave Goku a running head start though. :D

I don't blame them about the flowers, that scent is way too powerful. @_@ And with their sense of smell it must be even harder to deal with.

Poor Piccolo. XD


Looking forward to Vegeta's outfit. :3

that's sweet... how many chapters are left? Two? Three? I can't wait for the finale... K

Once again a fab chapter!
So much fun to read!
It's so descriptive and well written. ^.^

Yay! loved the update!! Cannot wait till the wedding!! Keep up the good work! :D Update when you can! :D

I do love this story. I'm glad you've been adding to it. I nicely written.