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Two or three cakes! XD

Waah~! Piccolo's confrontation with Vegeta was classic.

Yay for Goku's new ceremonial garb! :3

LOL, Vegeta at the end there. I'm sure he will. XD

I so love the picture!!! You are such an awesome artist ^_^ Of course can't forget the story either! Love weddings! I'll be sad when you finish :( Hope you have more stories acomin' *cheers*

It is a pleasure to read this story. Your characterisation is enchanting and makes it so easy to fall in love with the characters in question. I'm always rooting for someone, usually both sides of the argument. The way you paint it, in every conflict it's always easy to see the perspective of both players. Even Villa was understandable. In a very twisted way he was helping people, but at the expense of others. It's an insight into animal testing really: A necesary evil, but how far to take it.


I'm going to go away and tun off my philosophical button now.

OMG this is one of the best fan fic i have read in a LONG time.

i love how long it is and the lemons are VERY well done ^^

and mpreg goku is cute and the mental challenges make it even better =]

I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!

i spend the last few days doing nothing but reading this its highly addictive i dont ever want it too end D=

i also like your work on deviantart brilliant =]

look forward to more fanfic from you =D

Robyn xx

How could I have missed this awesome chapter of sheer awesomeness! X3
*Couldn't believe she was 2 chapters behind*
Holidays do this to me. TT_TT


Anyways!

Vegeta being dragged through all those stores was hilarious!
Goku probably could pull it off. XD Oh Pan...

I can't believe Goku stuck Momoku in with the plushies! ^^;

Bulma smacking Vegeta upside the head for being unromantic made me laugh. X3

*goes off to read #59*

Awwwww~! X3
That was so sweet! What a wonderful chapter!

I luv how it lead up to Goku following Vegeta right into the jewelry store; and everyone cheering him on and the one employee instructing Vegeta on the proper way to do it. XD

Oh man I can't wait to see what happens next!

The first scene was so cute. I love how you had Goku interogating Vegeta on his whereabouts. I laughed when he asked the Bulma question. So naive~!

As I told you, I really do love the way you had Goku whining at Vegeta the entire way to the jewelry story. XD And the fact that he didn't even realize where he was at first was priceless.

I could see the scene where Vegeta drops down on one knee so clearly and it made me SO giddy. Like, I had to look away from the screen and have a moment to recuperate kind of giddy. XD

Of course he said yessss. Why else would we go through the trouble of drawing all those outfits!? I would have hit you so hard if he said no.

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I love yooooooooooooouuu. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEDDING!!

I'm glad u updated and hope u had a nice holiday! I really like the lemon and I guess the wedding will be cute. I don't like that Goku is smaller and will not be able to be a super saiyan-I see why u did that-but it just doesn't see like Goku-I mean-the best interactions between Goku and Vegeta are when Goku gets stronger that him and Vegeta gets all pissy-I love it! I think u are making Goku alittle too effeminate-I mean, he is a MAN-not a woman. I don't mind him being uke, but please-can u write him alittle less girly? U've really got Vegeta done well, but u are really getting OOC with Goku now. And I really don't think Vegeta would have very much to do with the baby-remember how he pretty much ignored Trunks until he was older? So that is alittle OOC with Vegeta-I mean-do u really picture him ever changing a diaper? I don't think so--not Vegeta, Prince of the Saiyans!!!! Lol!!! But all in all-I like this -keep up the good work!

I know this is probably just a silly notion but... why don't they have Victor make a wish on the Dragonballs (or maybe the Namekian ones, if Earth's Porunga is still all fussy) to restore the health of Goku's heart and body? It's certainly been long enough, and he conveniently falls in the list of people who had nothing to do with the original Dragonball fiasco, unless you count quite possibly having been blown up in the battles before the Dragonballs disappeared as being a participant... in which case, off to Namek! Goku has too much potential in him to restrain his fighting abilities and ki for long and it seems to me that not at least trying to correct his health is just asking for a very painful end.
(Also, how did the others not realize how their behaviour was alienating Goku? I mean, I expected Vegeta to be at least a little oblivious, but everyone focused so much more on the baby and not Goku, from the pregnancy on - being more concerned with Goku's health in relation to how it would affect the baby, and later not allowing him to bond with the baby - the first days are so important! - you'd think the women were idiots or pod-people who replaced the normally intelligent ones we're used to. At least they finally pulled their heads out of the sand and realized that Goku was hurting. *shakes head* Took 'em long enough.)

That was so cute ^.^
Can't wait till the next one!
It's great and sad seeing Goku be able to turn Super again. Sad of course because of his heart. Poor thing ^.^
But hey! He's able to bring the saiyan prince to his knees ^.^ lol