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That last paragraph made my heart flutter ^.^
It was very sweet ^^

Yay!! I love to see Vegeta flustered :) This is such an awesome story, too bad it's coming to a close eh? Can't wait for the rest. K

I would assume in a sayinjin wedding there attire would be simple, light, and breezy. Flowing pants(both for the male and female/male). The vest would actually be a bit more, it would have intricate embroidery of wildlife and maybe a family crest. The color of the vest would be different depending on male or female(less dominate mate, the male would reflect his family(the embroidery would be made to work with the vest color), while the female would be white(the embroidery would be gold on the female) sense she is coming into the family/pack. Finally the would have stand alone sleeve matching there vests(I like sleeves >.>), and these would also be emroidered. There feet would be bare

J-chan

Ok, so I've read further into the story now, and I love it!
Goku stealing Veggie's clothes to make a nest is adorable!
And I love how you always have either real life facts or references to Dragonball Z. It makes the story more believable!
I'm gonna keep the review short so I can get back to reading the story ^.^

Ok, I need to draw some kind of outfit for Veggie and Goku if they do get married...
And sorry xD
I like reviewing xD
If I draw something I'm probably going to put it up on my DA.
My account name is Lepa93 xP

Such a fabulous story!
Just the right amount of drama and fluff to satisfy me!
Plus the pairing is heavenly <3
And this might be the ONLY story I've ever completed that is this long!
Normally I just skip long stories, but this one's too good to miss! <3
Great job! I love it!

I placed a photo link for an idea for Vegeta's side of the wedding outfit on my LiveJournal page. Here is the link to my LJ: http://inuyuyu.livejournal.com

I'm so glad that you updated, I was totally sleeping on the porch of this fic waiting for another chapter, so yay. But aw! Its going to end soon? Well i suppose thats a good thing that you didn't abandon this fic to a tortured existance of 'what if's' in my head (I am still suffering from the trauma of that happening so many times before when I followed fics by updates), and I hope there's a sequel! Or maybe just an epilogue at the end. But anyways, I'm sure you know of the artist XxChiChixX, and she drew this incredible picture of wedding!Goku and I totally think you should ask for the one she drew or bug her for ideas.

http://xxchichixx.deviantart.com/art/Wedding-Design-1-79856493

Setting Momo down in a bunch of soft stuffed animals is probably the nicest thing Goku could have done. XD Sure beats drowning her in the tub or something!

Hehe! Cute, they're gonna get married! (Maybe)

This was a really funny chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. X3 The whole idea of Vegeta standing in that jewelry store, surrounded by the girls, with a look of sheer dread on his face is hysterical! XD

I can't wait to see how he proposes. ;3

I tried desiging a wedding outfit for Goku before...>>;; But looking at it again I don't think I like it too much. Besides, that idea was for one of my stories and you'd need something new. I'll see what I can come up with when I get the chance. ^^

This is so cute - and the wedding should really help Goku (that and Vegeta actually paying some real attention to him for something other than sex.) Saiyan dress attire should be something like what Yul Brynner wore in stuff like the King and I. Something like this: http://www.fanunity.com/brynner/images/yul_brynner.jpg http://www.libertyfilmfestival.com/libertas/wp-content/brynneryul2.jpg (Yul Brynner would have made a great Saiyan.)