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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please update this fic! I remember reading this in some other websites, and I was completely pulled into the story. Hope you continue the rest! Can't wait for the update, if you plan to continue it, of course. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't wait to read more of this story, it's a very captivating plotline. Kudos as well for the detailed descriptions; the words paint vivid pictures in my head, even though usually I'm not a visual person. I hope you can continue this in the near future ^^
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most definitely intense and hott. The hard-core lime moment you made between Vegeta and Kakarot was so fantastic. I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next.
You have me hooked. Please please update soon :)
You have me hooked. Please please update soon :)
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chapter was intense, and they haven't even gone all the way yet! Nasty Nappa trying to get his paws on Kakarot, glad Vegeta stopped him.
Can't wait for Vegeta to find Kakarot again, and read what Raditz thinks about it.
Sad King Vegeta and Bardock will only be friends, I guess I can't have everything.
Can't wait for Vegeta to find Kakarot again, and read what Raditz thinks about it.
Sad King Vegeta and Bardock will only be friends, I guess I can't have everything.
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Wow... What an absolutely PERFECT chapter! I adore how you described the interactions between Kakarot and the other Saiyajins! It was so easy to picture everything and the story flows so nicely ^.^ I simply can't WAIT for the next chapter! Excellent work!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please let there be more.
=)
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. Loved the way you told it through the interaction between Bejita and Bardock, though I'm hoping they get even closer if you know what I mean!
Can't wait to see what Kakarot is like? Good/Evil? Silly/Intelligent? Wanton/Prudish? I'm so thrilled Vegeta is the one to go and get him though.
Lovin it.
xxx
Can't wait to see what Kakarot is like? Good/Evil? Silly/Intelligent? Wanton/Prudish? I'm so thrilled Vegeta is the one to go and get him though.
Lovin it.
xxx
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, and I can't wait to see more. I like the attention you give to details, though sometimes you go a bit overboard with descriptions and adjectives. But other than that, the story is very refreshing (I don't think I've ever seen a storyline quiete like this) and the banter between the king and Bardock had me smile. Very, very nice and please, do continue!