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by Tyrana

schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is going to be great! Although if that first chapter was anything to go by, I'll have to read with a dictionary in my lap next time. Maybe Kakarot landed in another place on Earth, as long as he didn't meet Gohan or fall in the ravine then he would stay Kaky. Maybe he landed on a planet that was just conquered by Earth. The possibilities are endless.I hope to see more soon!! Your writing is some of the best I've ever seen!!
person Lucia
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh GODS!
I have totally fallen in LOVE with this story! xD
The conversation between the king and his counselor... the situations it showed... the holes it left that I'm just dying to know more about... Few times have I read such an amazing story, and belive me, this one is SUPERB!!!
I'm on the edge of my seat, bitting off my finger-nails, cursing my luck for gettin so into this fic... but not regretting it an ounce. I can't wait to know more about the situation in earth under Bulma's power, how the big meeting between Vegeta and Kakrot will go, to know what happened with the "heroes" of earth such as Roshi, Tien, hell, even Kami-sama and MR.Popo xD
Hope see more of this great piece of work soon
Ja NE!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I highly enjoyed reading the first chapter, I find evil Bulma a cool plot twist and look forward to reading more, so plz update soon
person Katonie
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it so far!!! Please update again soon!!!
I'll love you forever and ever and ever if you do update soon! I swear!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a FANTASTIC start to this fic! Whaddya mean you weren't going to upload it?! This is a masterpiece in the making, what with your large words and fancy talk. Hecks yeah, definately a winner!

I'm looking forward to the meeting between Vegeta and Kakarotto ^.^ I wonder what Kakarotto will be like having grown up on an otherwise uninhabited planet. That should be VERRRRY interesting indeed!

Excellent work!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely nicely written, as usual, Ty! ^^ I really like the story idea and how you've adapted the characters to the change in atmosphere. It's really interesting to see how they Saiyajins live in their downtime. Don't worry about Vegeta. I think he's in character, considering. :D

Cant wait for Kakarot!...I never can. Lol.

Update soon!

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