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OMG this story has only gotten mucho mucho better-er!! since the last time i read it around chapter 4 or so. Can i just say i LOOOOVVEEE Paul!! he's so cute but also such a little perv *snickers* i couldn't believe when he got caught and went to jail HAHAHAHAHAHAHA hilarious!

oh and i know what u mean about thinking you'd never enjoy edxroy, me too! but this one.. good stuff! IN FACT i cant believe i'd actually like to request another one with ed on top. now that he more knows what he's doing and i think getting roy to vocalise all those little thoughts in his head about how hot it actually makes him would be sooo awesome!! :D Keep them coming lol they are so good

That was definatly worth the wait!!! I cant wait for them to do it at the beach!!!

As for suggestions, I'm REALLY surprised no ones thought of them doing it in a library!!!

You rule! and seriously why hasnt a library been brought up yet?! That would be sooo hot! They could do it in the kids section ^.^ thanks hun!

Fuckstalker and adorkable = so much win!

I read this on LJ yesterday but I've not got an account on there so I'm glad you put it here, I can comment. I love this, I was in hysterics from the point where Ed realised he really couldn't reach the voting machine. And I love your little take on American Pie, 'I'M COMING' just as she's about to open the curtain - classic.
My only question is, when I read it on LJ, there was no drawing. What happened to the amazing artwork that your friend does for you?
Thank you for continuing poor Paul, it just makes the day seem more fun.

All right! I love Paul...he's so funny! And they are so mean to him! Excellent chapter!

Whew! Happy Birthday to me! :D Girl! I read this a few days ago and have just now recovered from the nosebleeds! XD I know how Paul feels now! LOL!! The pic adds so much to this even if Ed has no automail. Bad artist! Bad! You must not make these kinds of mistakes! :D I'm sure Ed appreciates you making him whole again but Ed's just not Ed without his automail! :) Very few, if any, people can pull off an EdRoy sex scene. You, my friend, have done it brilliantly! Granted Roy still managed to top from the bottom but the end result was the same - Ed got to fuck Roy! w00t! :D I admit it. I had no idea what a fleshlight was. I googled it. wow! Paul is gonna have fun now! Although, with the way he cums so easily, it probably won't take much more than taking the cap off the thing for him to cum! XD Hey, wasn't Gladys the name of his last girlfriend or something? *snerk* You're bad, Roy! ;)
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=

yay, I sometimes feel so sorry for poor Paul, and then I think nah! I love these stories, I can't wait for the voting booth one. The pic at your LJ account is amazing. Did you draw it? 'Cos if you did you have some amazing talents.
Oh and I think Gladys is a brilliant name :) :) XD

w00t!!! HOTNESS!!! I gotta say, I prefer RoyxEd, BUT, the EdxRoy DID NOT dissapoint!!!

BOX SPRING?!?! Wow. Ew & that is one creepy manager! I loved it all. But where will poor Paul work next?

YAY!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!