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Hahahahaha! will Paul never get in on the action?! HAHAHAHA! I liked it they are soooo bad! Please continue!

ohmygod! poor paul! i feel so bad for him!! and in a CHURCH?? ...that is so them. i was afraid he was going to go to jail again! that would've been so unfair... lucky for him that lady was senile! oh, please write more soon! i love paul!!~

i've only read the first two so far bc i SUP to be studying but can you say HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG!! my sides, my sides. i positively died when paul walked in on the bj. and roy's 'hi paul.' classic. classic. i love this. hope the rest are just as good :D

ROFLMAO!!!!! This is the best story ever!! OMG! When Roy greeted Paul with a, "Hi Paul", like he'd known the guy for forever I thought I'd die laughing!!! XD The fact that Roy isn't even slightly bothered by Paul always catching them is hilarious!! I cracked up at the last line about Paul asking the cops for asylum!! XD priceless!! Paul needs to let that harpy he's with go and admit he wants (needs? ;D) a man! He can watch Roy and Ed all he wants just so long as he doesn't touch! :) I hope you write more of this!! This made my day! :D
Koneko =^.^=

okay... i read all of paul's stories in one sitting. and i just have to say: POOR PAUL!! i felt so bad for him with each story. of course, poor ed, too, because he was utterly embarrassed each time. *shakes head* but honestly, HE was asking for it. paul just walked into it with no real control. ... for the first four or five chapters. them he seemed to be doing it on purpose. i loved the last one, when he fell on the tent. and roy shouting 'bye paul!' in the store was excellent. and of course the one in the restaurant. 'he dropped his fork.' and 'hi paul! did you finish?' in the bathroom. it was all great!! wonderful job!!!~

Poor Paul! Those were o funny! And sexy of course! ;) Awesome! My complimets!

This is as addictive as sexy candy. Poor Paul! I look forward to more of his adventures in the future.

My favorite bit--"“God, hurry up and fuck me!” Even though he was beside himself in pleasure, he still remembered his manners, looking up at Roy with his large, amber eyes and adding, “Please?”"

Way too cute.

"Ed's banana handling."

This was the first line that made me lose it, I was basically in hysterics after that!

Roy just can't help himself can he? Winking and saying bye to Paul! I totaly have friends who do shit like that and you can't get out of there fast enough!

Fucking evil Roy! I love it! Damn!